sounds good to me. . good luck with the tune matey

sounds like my thread

sounds good though. very old skool trance. what synths you using in this?

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sounds good to me... but at 0:10, it's just a lil bit weird...

can u give more detail on weird??

thanks....

erm... i wish i could. the problem i have with it is maybe it sounded abit off. i don't know, i'm pretty dumb with theories, so... just had to use my ears to judge

cant catch it myself yet, i can post it with the precussion if that help with the timing, changed the bass though, was toying with two and the one im goin with sounds better, its cleaner.....

a second set of ears is a good thing

here it is with prec and new bassline and edited the melody a little

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Last edited by jey on Sep-08-2006 at 20:45

sounds fine just a bit typical if that helps ,try and do something not expected.

whats typical??

im a beguinner so a simple track is what im goin for, if i cant even do a simple track then i can forget about armin or tiesto style mixes in future!!

thanks for all ur comments....

Last edited by jey on Sep-09-2006 at 08:30

my opinion stays the same... it's good .

for some reason , it reminds me of a track you would here on tunnel trance force.

ok guys, major set back.... my ext hard drive died and i lost all music files e.t.c!!! and am now forced to start from scratch!!

since i lost the last track i went in a kinda diferent direction plus taking ur comments on board i tried to get away from a typical kind of mix, still is a little....

heres some of what ive done, not sure about the melody or the sound of the saw....

what yous think??

link1 is drums an bass....

link2 is the same with melody...

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Last edited by jey on Sep-16-2006 at 14:06