This was created for a college project piece I'm doing, what do you think? I reckon I'd better edit out the pills before I hand it in else my tutor won't be too impressed, lol

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Not too bad to be honest

looks like shit... to be honest, but alot of flyers out there look like shit most of the time... so ur in the average "shit"

i love nice flyers.. i hate crappy ones

and yes dot be a gimp and put pills on ur flyers

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Originally posted by Halcyon+On+On OOKA-OOKA ME NACHOS ME PRESS KEYS ON COMPUTER GOOD

i liked the don't stay in logo on the bottom right. nice touch.

anyhow if this is a real party, looks preatty hot fire.

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Originally posted by Halcyon+On+On OOKA-OOKA ME NACHOS ME PRESS KEYS ON COMPUTER GOOD

i mean..it's ok for some private party, it just looks not professional @ all...i dont know your experience with photoshop but u cannot expect to do the same product as someone who works with this everyday...

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Originally posted by nchs09 looks like shit... to be honest, but alot of flyers out there look like shit most of the time... so ur in the average "shit" i love nice flyers.. i hate crappy ones and yes dot be a gimp and put pills on ur flyers

In what way do you think it's shit?

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i think it's fine. but yeah if your tutor might get iffy on the pill, then take it out, otherwise, it looks fine. if that is a real event, it looks like it would be a really good time!

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Originally posted by inconspicuous AndreaCKY772. just. so. dumb.

I think it's too simple. Could use some complexity of some kind.

Any advice on how to make it look better? In what way does it look unprofessional? All constructive critisisms are welcome

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Originally posted by dj_cuba In what way do you think it's shit?

now when i said it looked like shit.. i wasnt trying to be a prick, i was just giving my opinion because u asked for it.

ok the letters with the heat 2006 like they are on fire its a bit cheesy. the pills just look stupid, and just spell out everything correctly... xtravaganza? eh..

anyhow i think it would look better with out the flames on the bottom... just the color fade from redish to white

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Originally posted by dj_cuba Any advice on how to make it look better? In what way does it look unprofessional? All constructive critisisms are welcome

some of the old rave ones were the best flyers around. this is a new variant of an old idea



it looks much better than yours imo.