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Trance != oonce oonce oonce oonce + supersaw.
Your kick drum choice is pretty horrible, I've gotta say. Maybe it works in Hip Hop, but this is a completely different kind of music. You should also spend some time in the song actually developing the musical themes, and not just switching them and playing them for a few measures. Lastly, the supersaw has been dead for six years. You're not awesome enough to bring it back. Maybe if you become fabulously famous at this, you can try to do it again.
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