Nice track, very smooth! Keep it up...

Nice bassline!

I think the kick isn't quite punchy enough. (imo)

Keep it up!

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Thanks guys much appreciated. Ill change the kick I think your right there.

i can't hear it :/

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Its still up and working. Try again mate.

doesnt seem to work with my PC either... sorry

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OK this offically sucks. Do you guys get any messages when you go to the site? Are you downloading or streaming?

oh the download works .. stream doesn't...

well...the kick is a bit strange...maybe too much compression on it or something...doesn't have the ooomph...mate just a little guide...kicks should be felt in your chest and lower...not hurt your ears...

otherwise very creative and energetic...I liked that...is the piano from Reason? Sounds very reasonish...you might want to not leave it as dry as it is now...the build up is pretty cool and you went pretty creative with drum fills I like that...

good job overall

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Ah ok great glad that the download is working at least. Thanks for the feedback booster, Ill defo change that kick. It is a reason piano, are you saying process the piano more? To be honest I wasnt too kean on it but the piano samples I have at the moment are rubbish.

play with the velocity of the piano...it will make it sound a loooooooooot better...also...you might want to eq it a bit...maybe even do some compression as far as I remember the compresor (CMP1?) or whatever it's name in reason was, was pretty good for this purpose...setup a medium attack and long release...(don't use mclass for this) should make it a lot less reasonish on first sight

good luck

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Great advice thanks Ill try this out.