not exactly, i've been working on that track for long time and i worked on other projects in the backround so now its finished
awaiting comments
May-12-2002 22:54
Icone
In Dreams...
Registered: Nov 2001
Location: Leuven, Belgium
quote:
Originally posted by Gil Shwarts
not exactly, i've been working on that track for long time and i worked on other projects in the backround so now its finished
yeah that's what i have to do as well sometimes but most people don't know that i think... and then they keep telling me 'yet another one' if they don't know the whole story hehe but then again... i forgive them
listened to the track, it's sounding good! but there's one big disharmony in the bass during the play of the phasing main lead! that's the only thing that bothered me in this track... it's near the end of the main lead loop.
Maybe turn down the rather loud synth that kicks in every now and then, it takes alot away from the other synths. The buildup is rather long, but i like it, kind of creepy atmosphere that is broken through by the piano )
I hope this helped, and that i didn't offend you I'd rate it 7/10 (minus the disharmony that should be easily taken care of).
take care!
LW
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Icone / Van Gelder / Blue Manta / The Elemental
Registered: Jul 2001
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well after listening to your track i thought, it would do with some good editing.. some of the samples are too hard (uuh the sample that you use from the beginning till the end.. tune it down a little) if you ask me..
and a thought of mine maybe you should let the piano sample play a solo or somehthing and then hitting the middle (the main melody if ya know what i mean)..
and uuh.. imo you should try to well, try to put more accent on the type of music you're trying to make.. it's no somewhere between uplifiting and hardtrance (mainly bcause of some of your samples and the build-up you used)
hope to have helped you, it's just my opinion and i still kinda liked the tune..
Listening now....I think the lead in the intro is too loud, it takes all the attention. Also the intro is too long for me...
The lead cuts annoyingly thru your mix....haven't heard your club mix yet....but that really spoiled the, otherwise cool, song for me
the sound that comes in at 5:30 is wikkid
But listen to the bassline at exactly 5:40....it is one tone too high for my gut
It's got the right melodys, the right instruments, the right structure (tho arguably the break at 5:something could have come sooner) but the mix is definately lacking....(relative volumes of the channels)
Just my honest 2 cents, will listen to the club mix too some time
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All rhythm evolves around a kick...
that's the only thing that bothered me in this track... it's near the end of the main lead loop.
