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derail
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Feb 2007
Location: Canberra, Australia
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Had a quick listen to the song, it still needs a lot of work - the overall sound is very "mid-range"-ey/muddy, the melodic progression is okay, but nothing special...
Of course, it totally depends on which label you're after, there are thousands out there, heaps of digital labels who will manage to sell one or two copies of your song...
If your goal is a label such as vandit or anjunabeats, you're not ready at this point in time.
Just keep working on what you're doing. Look to improve each day in some area relating to your music. Listen to your favourite songs and make notes about what sounds "better" about those songs, compared to your songs, and why they sound better. Then work on raising the quality of your own songs - musically, the mix quality, the production techniques. With consistent daily focus on improvement, you'll be making songs much better than this in six month's time.
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Jun-26-2008 07:52
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daveth
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: Mar 2007
Location: syd
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If I were in your position, what I'd be after is some critique of my track so I can improve it.
Please take this as *constructive* critisism, my intentions are just to try to help you achieve an even better sound I'll update this post when I get more time to listen..
For now, the first thing that stands out is the kick. Your kick needs a fair bit of work. It sounds too deep, almost as if you've lowpassed it. From my limited understanding you should almost be doing the opposite. I'm getting so much muddy low end from your kick it makes me feel somewhat dizzy each time it hits. Also, it sounds like you are using different velocities for the 4th kick in each bar, giving it this 1, 2, 3, *4* feeling, which adds to the seasickness effect from the muddy/low-end heavy kick, IMO.
As derail said, keep listening to artists and tracks that really move you. Listen to what you really like about these tracks.
Keep working mate 
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Jun-26-2008 09:14
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Barachem
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: Oct 2004
Location: Groningen, Netherlands
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Kick needs reworking, otherwise it sounds cheezy enough to be put out by some label.
Be sure to visit www.plugzurcheez.com.
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Jun-26-2008 15:25
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davidbuhau
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Jun 2008
Location: bay area california
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the simple answer is this... your music is "label-worthy" once labels start contacting you...
do you play out? do the people go ape shit when you play? these are important questions... do you play only your own material when you play out?
david
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Jun-26-2008 20:30
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