The song is the top on the list-- "Ahava-Happiness Condensed"
Please do me a favor and critique it--for my sanity--some have said that this is one of the best songs they've heard in a long time, but others don't seem to like something about it....I want to know what you think.
I want to get this signed soon if I can--do you think this is realistic?
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE LEAVE COMMENTS--any bit of criticism will help me
Nov-07-2008 22:48
PutBoy
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Dec 2004
Location: LA (Landskrona)
I like the groove. I like the atmosphere. I like the production. It's good.
needs more work on the final sound for me
but, the idea its pretty good
its true, work more on the perclines , make em more dynamic
the pads are pretty nice
in the bridge, that guitar/piano sounds good, but... meaby a lil bit to simply? it sound that u used the arpeggiator , it sounds good, but it can be better (very very personal opinion)
well done! =) nice track u make here
it worth the 3 month effort
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Nov-08-2008 20:30
goodtime
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Registered: Sep 2008
Location: George
I think its grat and you should release it. its better than some of Armins or Tiestos latest stuff. Geez some of u guys will never make it the way you obsess. its just music FFS.
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Nov-09-2008 03:35
Sh!fty
where's the booz?
Registered: May 2005
Location: Mechelen/Brussel
quote:
Originally posted by goodtime
Geez some of u guys will never make it the way you obsess. its just music FFS.
He asked for our opinion and he got mine (artist 2 artist).
He can choose to either ignore our advice or not, that's up to him.
It's easy to write that his song was great, but that wouldn't help him when labels would reject his song, doesn't it?
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Can an idiot produce music? Judge for yourself....
any label that rejects this song is dumb, or has ulterior motives for rejecting it, I think if you listen to the shit that gets released you will know.
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Nov-09-2008 11:25
Akridrot
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Registered: Jun 2004
Location: Free Candy! Yay! (Only available in select vans)
You said you worked on this song everyday for 3 months, and I believe you. Only thing that needs to be improved is the clarity of the mix, really. The foundation of the track is strong, which is a good thing. Just work on finding a way to make the mix sound as professional as possible.
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Nov-11-2008 01:47
music2dance2
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Jul 2001
Location: U.K.
No question you could get this signed. As others have said work on the mix and varition on some percs. But to be honest its far off, overall the track is a great melodic track. Good work dude
Nov-11-2008 03:52
goodtime
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Registered: Sep 2008
Location: George
Everyone it has just come to my attention that this dude is actually already a very famous producer and we have all been had!
