Push - Tranzy state of mind (Native Trancer remix)
Ok, it's finished (I think )
It got pretty long, but it shouldn't be boring. Hang in there till the second breakdown cause it's very different from the first
excellent work mate! this is a very professional sounding track! u must of worked hard on it i love the fx at the start, and when the melody kicks in proper its quality
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Fave Tune at the Moment: Mesmerizer - Taking Control
The remix is good! On the positive note, it sounds like a trancy state of mind mix.... Its not so twisted that you cant id it.
I think it has potential...
I will voice my opinion on what can make it better (in a positive way)
Just like you mentioned before, you stated to pay attention to the second brake....I completely agree. It caught my attention at that point. But only after that point did it really start to hit me. For a regular listener, he probably wont have that much patience...its a bit long. I would start the first break in the same fashion (not necessarily identical) as the second.
Im just saying from a listeners stand point and DJs standpoint: Why would i have to wait so long to get to the goodies? I want the good stuff right now.
Also, if im djing and a little pressed for track time, I want to my want to mix directly to the next song right after the first brake and buildup (considering I've already gotten the good stuff).
Hope you get what im saying....thats just one thing that I think would make the song more flexible, better.
Dont take the Criticizing in a negative way... like i said the remix is really good IMO, but just trying let you know what I, as a Trance DJ/listener, want to hear... considering that the song has potential and you have talent.
Jul-05-2002 02:27
Haak
analog evading shark
Registered: Jun 2001
Location: Oslo, Norway
Thanks for commenting, bachatu! I know what you mean, maybe I'll make an edit withouth the first break
i`ve heard some other tracks but i must say this is the best one from all!
i really like the bass thing that changes.. and all the layers going on.. it really sounds proffesional.. only the main leads could be improved. they are 2 weak..
but keep up this level. (and improve the leads )
greetz,
DJ Mantis
Jul-06-2002 14:53
Haak
analog evading shark
Registered: Jun 2001
Location: Oslo, Norway
Thanks for commenting everybody!
Mantisnl: yeah I'm not completely satisfied with the leads myself, but I'm planning on buying a hardware synth this fall, so then I can guarantee you the leads will be pfat, hehe
Registered: Jan 2002
Location: anywhere but tranceaddict.com
The intro is very nice !
I love it maaaan !!
8.2 out of 10
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mner
Jul-06-2002 19:43
Passiva
Ava Mea / Syndique
Registered: Jan 2002
Location: Rotterdam, The Netherlands
Wow! I just listened to the full version, even better than the sample you posted a while ago.. I like the sounds you've used, it makes the song better than the original (imo)..
But as the others already said, it's a bit too long.