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Eddie, you put a smile on my face every day 
| quote: | Originally posted by EddieZilker
It's a bit of an odd circle, musically. Structurally, it's fine, but it seems to dispel the tension it builds, once it starts up the scale, especially in the last few measures. It's actually very anti-climactic and has a very artificial feel to it.
The rhythmic cadence also takes away from it. Parts, where it could get interesting, are ruined when new chords fall straight on the down-beat of the next measure. Preceding chords seem to be entirely too obliterated by their successor which destroys potentially related voicing with whole-sale dismissal and replacement.
In short, musically, on a technical level, it's flawless, but in terms of soul, it has none. |
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