I consider another idea to develop farther and would like you guys to give me some feedback on it.

I'm after very dynamic and full of energy 138bpm Trance with some melodic and catchy part in it but I'm not really set on anything yet and your input would be more then welcome

So do you feel enough energy is coming in from 0:20~0:21 part, does this have enough dynamic impact for you??? - what do you think?

Here we go:

DriusX - A PROMISE (early WIP - different direction from this early track) by DariusX.

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Last edited by TranceLover007 on Apr-18-2012 at 22:02

Too short! Everything else sounds great though. Can't wait to hear the finished product.










I should just keep a word-file with this text handy because quality WIP's happen often enough to warrant it.

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Originally posted by EddieZilker Too short! Everything else sounds great though. Can't wait to hear the finished product. I should just keep a word-file with this text handy because quality WIP's happen often enough to warrant it.

He, he, he, this is really good idea Eddie but in this case was about this 0:20 sec part which I thing brings a lot of drive and energy to this track (in my opinion) and the rest was only a texture to show a bit of melodic environment buildup but yeah, I was trying to find out if this part feel energetic enough to you as feel to me.

Any more takers - just a friendly advice/question.

Cheers all,

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Wow nice one Darek, always love your work.
nice driving energy that's mellow, it's really chilling me out man and i get the sense that this ones about to take off... yea to short hehehe

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what you've got so far is really nice. Its begging for something awesome to happen, please deliver!

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This could go one of two ways ... already there's an interesting mimimal (almost ambient) trance texture to this and you could develop along those lines. Otherwise, you could develop more parts that fill the chords and the bass out, a set of fuller or full on rhythm parts and then develop a hook on the top.

With the second route, it's up to you how much you apply the 'epic' approach (so to speak) as those are really nice chords and interesting enough to underpin a really ambitous tune.

Dropping back to this minimal style would give amazing scope for dynamics too!!

Great stuff ...

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Originally posted by Peter Campbell Wow nice one Darek, always love your work. nice driving energy that's mellow, it's really chilling me out man and i get the sense that this ones about to take off... yea to short hehehe

Yeah, this one has something special that makes me enjoying working on it, if you know what I mean - always great to have your opinion Peter, really appreciate man and have a good one !!!

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I think you are a deceptively good producer. I don't know if it is because you aren't a big self promoter (or because you were talking in the clouds about 'changing the way music is sold' a few weeks back :P) but I didn't realize how serious a producer you are soon enough.

One thing I notice about this song and your Colours track is your main melody is very staccato. Or maybe I should say melodies, it is hard to pin down one melody in your songs, which is a good thing. Lots of different parts playing short notes kind of create an atmosphere. So your songs move and don't drag at all. And, they don't sound loopy. So your soundscape has a subtleness to it, and isn't overly 'loud' or dominating feeling. I really like the colours submission you gave, especially after listening to it a few times; professional, lovely song.

I am not trying to relegate you to a specific style or sound but your stuff reminds me of the trance Sasha was playing in the early to mid 2000's (I mean a current, relevant sounding version of it). Kind of a Der Dritte Raum - Hale Bopp style trance. That is really a compliment because I like that kind of Sasha trance better than the More uplifting stuff that got huge in the mid 2000's. Cause honestly your stuff is current but I don't know where you should send it because I think you need to be on a major label!

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For my understanding of 'dynamic' this is quite far.

Anyway, I'd like to suggest someone who's been a huge inspiration for me and exemplifies perfectly what I mean with 'dynamic'.

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Originally posted by Th3Reindeer what you've got so far is really nice. Its begging for something awesome to happen, please deliver!

Will be done my friend, already show some interest so I will be on it for sure

Appreciate man,

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Originally posted by LeftOuterJoin This could go one of two ways ... already there's an interesting mimimal (almost ambient) trance texture to this and you could develop along those lines. Otherwise, you could develop more parts that fill the chords and the bass out, a set of fuller or full on rhythm parts and then develop a hook on the top. With the second route, it's up to you how much you apply the 'epic' approach (so to speak) as those are really nice chords and interesting enough to underpin a really ambitous tune. Dropping back to this minimal style would give amazing scope for dynamics too!! Great stuff ...

This is really cool if I was able to engage/interact with people creativity by posting this track, that's really good sign

As for ideas, both of them sound really cool and are worth to explore but first I will continue with my vision on this track and see if I can get something really cool and catchy out of it

Glad you find some time to comment on this track my friend, thank you.

Darek

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Has a compelling feel and energy Darek, it really could go a few ways this. It has sufficient dynamic energy and you should keep this tight and focused gradually building the enrgy. The odd short snare / percs drum variation snippet would be good to introduce the next rung up on the energy ladder at appropriate points.

Nice sounds and mix so far.

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