as you guys may or may not know, I've gotten into producing a bit of trance over the last year. Only the last month or so have I been making decent stuff, and I am hoping to release some stuff now that I've got some more free time than usual.

LeMay - Elixir (Exclusive TOTA Sample)
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its in ogg format

I got started on this track yesterday, and just finished up another 2 hours of work. Probably the nicest track I've created, and now I'm looking for feedback

Please be honest, and let me know what you think of this sample. I can take criticism as long as its constructive.

I would post in the production forums, but its hard to get feedback there.

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omg..i havent downloaded yet..but THANKGOD SOME PEOPLE KNOW THT OGG VORBIS EXISTS

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I downloaded it, first opinon was it was pretty good, i liked it, hehe kinda short, but good, i will give more feed back tommrow, i am dead tired tonite, but good job.

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Originally posted by Tudo Beleza I downloaded it, first opinon was it was pretty good, i liked it, hehe kinda short, but good, i will give more feed back tommrow, i am dead tired tonite, but good job.

well duh its short... its a SAMPLE :P

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Originally posted by Mosaic well duh its short... its a SAMPLE :P

hehe i am so tired, i can not read english, i am amazed i can write english at this moment.


so i should have said, nice SAMPLE, can not wait till it is a TRACK

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Originally posted by Tudo Beleza hehe i am so tired, i can not read english, i am amazed i can write english at this moment. so i should have said, nice SAMPLE, can not wait till it is a TRACK

heheheh thx

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ok I listened to it a couple times...I think it's a very good sample. It has many of the elements that make a good trance track. My advice (just advice get a couple more opinions before you do this maybe), the main riff that comes in at like 6 seconds, I think it should exit at about 54 seconds, and not re-enter till the buildup at around 2:17 again. It get a little repetative how that riff is structed right now.

Still it's better than anything I've produced I've been fooling around with fruity for a couple weeks, I use samples though, which I kinda wanna stop doing, but anyways awseme track! I really like the brakedown & buildup!

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Originally posted by Elmo-On-XTC ok I listened to it a couple times...I think it's a very good sample. It has many of the elements that make a good trance track. My advice (just advice get a couple more opinions before you do this maybe), the main riff that comes in at like 6 seconds, I think it should exit at about 54 seconds, and not re-enter till the buildup at around 2:17 again. It get a little repetative how that riff is structed right now. Still it's better than anything I've produced I've been fooling around with fruity for a couple weeks, I use samples though, which I kinda wanna stop doing, but anyways awseme track! I really like the brakedown & buildup!

okay cool, I'll try some of your ideas.

that crystal/digital riff you are referring to is the latest addition to the track, so I haven't experimented with it a whole lot. I love the way it sounds with the lead synth during the chorus... but not as much during the intro.

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the main riff sounds too acidic for the track, i think it should be softer. as it repeats, it dominates your melody a bit. other than that, it's structured pretty well.

what app opens oog files?

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Originally posted by DJ El Kay Dee omg..i havent downloaded yet..but THANKGOD SOME PEOPLE KNOW THT OGG VORBIS EXISTS

i know what ogg vorbis is :-|

Mosaic ,
send a link to download this app plz
Thanx