clenching your flesh
with my dirty nails,
i can't start afresh
when everything fails

i want to break free,
but you drag me down
won't you let me be?
just fuck off and drown.



ahh, that is disturbing. but i'm impressed, only took me like 50 seconds this time and things actually rhyme

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nice stuff ... 50 seconds is good ,, you going for a record ?? try 40 sec next time . hehe

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here's a poem i'm working on.

It's called DVMksVMkevmikewvmEWIKVMirewvmi3wmc32FM@$#kmv2m32kvm

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The father made fetuses with flesh licking ladies / While you and your mother were asleep in the trailer park / Thunderous sparks from the dark of the stadiums / The music and medicine you needed for comforting / So make all your fat, fleshy fingers fingers to moving / And pluck all your silly strings and / Bend all your notes for me and / Soft silly music is meaningful, magical / The movements were beautiful / All in your ovaries / All of them milking with green fleshy flowers / While powerful pistons were sugary sweet machines, / Smelling of semen all under the garden / Was all you were needing when you still believed in me.

Trance can somtimes be poetic and I found that out listening to Dj Carlos's Everyone's Tears on Liquid Trance. The poem has a special meaning to it; different tears for different emotions. But I couldn't find out who did the vocals. Here's the poem...

Pain, fear, exhaustion, frustration
How deep do the fluids of Emotion Run?
Tears of Joy
Tears of Fear
Painful Tears

Tears to commnicate
When unable to Speak
Tears to protect
The delicate Senses
Tears of Exhaustion
Squeezed out with a yawn

Tears hidden
Until in a sanctuary of privacy
Tears revealing pain
As a single drop
Cascades

Tears to soften headaches
Glossy Eyes
Foggy Eyes turn Listic
The waterworks by the mind's command
How deep do the fluids of emotion run?

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Where has the time gone??????

YOU ARE SO UGLY

wear makeup
you stupid bitch.
you look like a goatse memorial.

i'll spray you with katchup.
i'll crap in your snatch.
i'll give you a ******* tutorial.

LMAO@you are so ugly

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Originally posted by nic01445 YOU ARE SO UGLY wear makeup you stupid bitch. you look like a goatse memorial. i'll spray you with katchup. i'll crap in your snatch. i'll give you a ******* tutorial.

HAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAavHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHahAHAHAHAHAHAHhahahahahahaAHhah
ahaha

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The father made fetuses with flesh licking ladies / While you and your mother were asleep in the trailer park / Thunderous sparks from the dark of the stadiums / The music and medicine you needed for comforting / So make all your fat, fleshy fingers fingers to moving / And pluck all your silly strings and / Bend all your notes for me and / Soft silly music is meaningful, magical / The movements were beautiful / All in your ovaries / All of them milking with green fleshy flowers / While powerful pistons were sugary sweet machines, / Smelling of semen all under the garden / Was all you were needing when you still believed in me.

for some reason I did not find 'You are so ugly' that amusing. Actually, it's kind of pathetic.

So, to change it up a bit...

left and right
right and left
they suffocate me
to my death
an inch away
suspiciously kind
stealing my air
raping my mind
suddenly I see
all has turned black
unable to love
from heart attack
I waste away
no one can see
this solemn life
sharp misery
right and left
left and right
I hold myself
in space so tight

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If you do not stand for anything,
You will fall for everything.

...and now part 2 to my last one:

they are under my bed
they are in the walls
they sit behind me
they follow me down halls
they stare at my soul
they know I don't see
they want what is here
they tear into me
they are vicious and sly
they are your friends
they cut your throat, but
they make ammends
they are your family
they are everyone close
they are all strangers
they kill you the most
they are partake in conspiracy
they really don't care
they want you to drown
they want your air

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If you do not stand for anything,
You will fall for everything.

quote:

Originally posted by Mr. Pink Silence: Snap out of it! You understand me. You know exactly what I'm saying! I don't even have to say it for you to know what it is. I'm not going to state it. I'm not going to "tell" you. See beyond words, see beyond text! This is not a poem! Look for the circle! ......

Props to you. I really like.

quote:

Originally posted by nic01445 YOU ARE SO UGLY wear makeup you stupid bitch. you look like a goatse memorial. i'll spray you with katchup. i'll crap in your snatch. i'll give you a ******* tutorial.

OMFGIDIE!!!!

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Originally posted by Halcyon+On+On OOKA-OOKA ME NACHOS ME PRESS KEYS ON COMPUTER GOOD

quote:

Originally posted by Miss Bliss Props to you. I really like.

Muchas gracias.
much appreciated

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