we need more haiku
without it the world is bleak
so come on TA
a whisper a sigh
her voice humming in my ear
guess what we just did
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May-23-2002 00:53
cycloptor
BANANA!!
Registered: Oct 2001
Location: the hammer
quote:
Originally posted by Orbax
a whisper a sigh
her voice humming in my ear
guess what we just did
you guys were fucking....wernt ya ******s!!!!
May-23-2002 01:05
Orbax
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Apr 2002
Location:
muah muah muah
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May-23-2002 01:11
cycloptor
BANANA!!
Registered: Oct 2001
Location: the hammer
wuzzle wuzzel??
allright, back to the haikus. the first one is about this rich area of hamilton called the "meadowlands" its this new suburb thing... all the kids think theyre black...gross....but entertaining. "green peace" i think is just kind of funny... and disco duck was about this cell phone ad that aired in canada a while back.
GHETTOS OF WEST MEDOWLANDS
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
yo, what up home fry
bust a cap in you white ass
and blame my butler
GREEN PEACE
^^^^^^^^^^^^
sassy molassy
a hungry hungry panda
covered in poo
DISCO DUCK
^^^^^^^^^^^
duck watched by millions
crazy dance sparks consumption
brain oozing from ears
May-23-2002 01:27
Orbax
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Apr 2002
Location:
quote:
GHETTOS OF WEST MEDOWLANDS
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
yo, what up home fry
bust a cap in you white ass
and blame my butler
lol!
The rolling grassland
puffy white clouds sit on my
face and so does she
but seriously folks
Chickens in the barn
farmer in his little shack
we are in the loft
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May-23-2002 05:03
Orbax
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Apr 2002
Location:
can you tell im running out of ideas for the girl-boy and scenic topics
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May-23-2002 05:04
Sand Leaper
Tension hunter
Registered: Jul 2001
Location: Oslo, Norway
Alright,I re-wrote the previous poems...Check them out,and tell me what you think.Did I get it right this time?
much better except the second one has 6 in the first line!
You may now enter the alliance.
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May-23-2002 16:29
UWM
mandroid
Registered: Mar 2001
Location: Here
Here is my first attempt at a haiku here
Music in my ears
Ecstasy in my body
Can it get better?
May-23-2002 16:52
Sand Leaper
Tension hunter
Registered: Jul 2001
Location: Oslo, Norway
Great!!
Yay!!Finally an alliance that Isn't about dj worshipping!! Hopefully Swampy will turn on the sigs soon,so that we won't have to type/copy-paste all the time.Btw,what does our banner look like?
Great!!
