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| quote: | Originally posted by dreamdecks
Hey Nautica - Whats the point in going to all the bother of doing a reply just to diss his work?
I'd like to see you try and do something half as good as that.
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I'm not so stupid as to dis someone's work unless I can do better. Here's what I knocked up in a couple of minutes:

One of the biggest holes I could pic in Chris' work is that the text obstructs the subject matter of the photo, rather than flow around it like my demonstration.
Rather than slag it off I'd prefer to make some helpful suggestions. As mentioned, try to flow the text, also vary the fonts used. It's nice enough but some variety would look awesome. Maybe even take a standard font and modify it to create something unique.
Also take a little more care with alignment, so for example the "S" os "stone" sits directly inline under the "R" of "solar". Kerning letter pairs as well, in "sympathy" look at the gap between the Y and the M, then the M and the P. Consistant spacing is good and looks neat.
Here's a quick Black Hole sleeve I made.

Although the photo isn't that good (cheap camera) it's one I took myself in a club and I think it's pretty cool.
So to some up, DevanteS, good work, room for improvement! 
Hope you can amaze us all soon, including the picky ones! 
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Wanted! - Money or consider swaps:
BT Mercury & Solace (Black Hole 12" - BLH112) - got it! c/o discogs marketplace
DJ Tiesto Sparkles Remix (Transa / Airscape / Starecase) (Black Hole 12" - BLH118) - mine at last! Thanks to Gemm
San Feel My Love / Stroke (In Trance We Trust 12" - ITWT302) - in my collection finally! discogs marketplace again
Nunca House Of Doom (In Trance We Trust 12" - ITWT300) - if you have this in an ITWT sleeve with the promo sheet let me know!
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