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Originally posted by jcosgrove no offence, but this is such an insult to an amazing tune.

i take that as an offence. not sure if you talking about the vocals or the music but that doesnt matter. im not a pro, nor is my vocalist. we do this for FUN and we are certainly NOT trying to insult tunes. please don't bother me with that kinda posts anymore. thnx.

@JMF [TrAcId] and DJ_NRG

thanks for feedback, i'll do my best to fit em in better, add some fx. and i'll ask if she wants to sing again she wasnt happy at all with what i recorded..but we didnt have time to do more so i just used what i had, i think i shouldnt have done that, or at least not posted it..my bad i guess

@wim, ill see what i can do about the synths and ill post a dub soon... but as i posted earlier..a dub remix wouldnt really be a remix since it just doesnt sound like the original at all.
and also...i build the track to the vocals, so i might have to restructure the whole thing. thnx for replying

john

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There's only one thing wrong with this, guess what? The vocals, please make a dub, this is hurting my ears

Lets discuss the vocals:

I want to remember a track played by Oakenfold in his great World Tour:
Blondie - "Nothing Is Real But The Girl [Danny Tenaglia Club Mix]"

The female vocalist wasn't "sweet" to. But hammered. I think, as many of you, she has to rerecord the song a several times and she could sing a bit louder (a bit of "shouting") and in the mix you turn down the volume of her vocals.
A vocoder can do the rest to let sing her "on key"...
for leading the notes...your synths could be a little more sharpened.
Rest of the track is done very well.

And all critics has to remember that this is a "real" vocalist, nothin sampled from a vocal disc. Let's work with her...

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Originally posted by John Hey all, Something new again Because I didnt feel like finding the notes of the original melody (yeah i'm lazy) i just made my own. A friend of mine sang the lyrics for me (thanks hanne, you're the best), this was the first time for her ever singing something like this (trance)...she normally sings to rock.. so i'm gonna kill you if you bitch on 'my' vocalist and this is an early version. i have to change the volume and reverb levels of the vocals i think.. ah well...please have a listen and tell me what you think, what to improve etc thnx Andain - Beautiful Things (John vs Hanne Vocal Mix) right click save target as john edit: this is also the first time i ever worked with vocals so dont be to hard on me either hehehe

damn hehehe...i was about to say...HOOK ME UP WITH AN ACAPELLA OF BEAUTIFUL THINGS HEHEHE...but i'm checking it out now...ok...like everyone is saying...the beats is good. as far as the vocals...they sound a little weak...definitely work on those the rest of the song over powers them. i also have to say...i'm sure that your friends voice is great on a rock track, but i don't think the vocals work very well with this song. its not anyone's fault its just not her style. or maybe i'm just bias because i've heard mavie's voice...

the track itself sounds very pro man, good job.. but as said before, the vocals just don`t seem 2 fit it.. i know its very hard 2 make a vocal track urself, a friend of mine did one aswell, and he had a very hard time making it
just keep on making vocal tracks and u`ll get better, just as everything in production.. i gues

grtz,

mantis

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Lets discuss the vocals: I want to remember a track played by Oakenfold in his great World Tour: Blondie - "Nothing Is Real But The Girl [Danny Tenaglia Club Mix]" The female vocalist wasn't "sweet" to. But hammered. I think, as many of you, she has to rerecord the song a several times and she could sing a bit louder (a bit of "shouting") and in the mix you turn down the volume of her vocals. A vocoder can do the rest to let sing her "on key"... for leading the notes...your synths could be a little more sharpened. Rest of the track is done very well. And all critics has to remember that this is a "real" vocalist, nothin sampled from a vocal disc. Let's work with her...

thanks RNKMSX! very motivating post...i needed that
will work on the synth!

@floorfiller somebody did asked me for the a capella's tho thnx for replying!

@mantisnl thnx for replying as well but i dont think im gonna do a vocal track in the near future again heheh

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