nice tune! those fills and bass are wicked! turn up the percussion some. i like the lead, though i think it could use some variation. nice work
8/10
-nic-

Ive got a clip of what could be the final version coming up in a few mins...

watch this space if you wana hear more!

George

George Hales - Kyoto (Clip)

Nice track! I'd want that bassline to be a little harder and more progressive though, it is too soft in my opinion Also the trasitions need a little bit more work to draw out the full potential power of this track. I like the melodies and your use of sound! With a little bit more work this track would be a killer!!

muuuuuuuch better. I really dig that lead. and the pads during the build are gorgeous! Bass is a lot better that the previous sample. i give this a 9/10!

nic

Will listen tonight and let ya know!

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this is beautiful...
the fx make it, might lower down the jingly bells in the break a bit

the lead is very nice also.

ooh yes and the kick in makes justice...lovely!

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sounds pretty good to me.. main lead is a tad repetitive, but it's acceptable.. no major problems as far as sounds and fx are concerned, however i'd:

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Originally posted by JohnOC lower down the jingly bells in the break a bit

very nice job for a first production!

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You know what I think m8! Absolutely massive.

As for those "jingly bells", they make the tune for me.

This is far from my first production, ive been working for a long long time on music. But this is my first 'solo' production.

Im working on a newer version which u wont be able to hear untill a label deal is sorted and the vinyls are out!

George

ill give this 11/10, its pure quality!!!!!!!!
the bass the synth, the dreamy and uplifting feeling to it. ! the melody!!! yooooo this tune roxxx

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