great improvement from ur previous works dave.
love the breakdown, buildup is good but could progress on it further. make it stronger, more powerful, more driving. whole tune needs a lil more drive, and i think that comes with the bass line as jace mentioned.

lotta potential on these boards.

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okay, where can i get the details of this comp from?

quote:

Originally posted by gilmista it was awesome man.. seriously mad. snowed non-stop for the last few days which topped it off. Did you end up going to canberra dude?

yeah ended up going down with webmeister and some ITM crew, awesome weekend ! highlight of my hols. forsure ! catch u at halcyon this fri forsure though

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hey people just got on and wanna say thanks heaps for the comments, i can assure you that the melody at 28secs is in the same key as the rest of the song, but i will look in to the bassline and driving aspects of the track, although i have to warn that my processor cannot handle the song anymore and i cannot listen to it in the program to make touchups . id have to export it to mp3 listen to what i wanna change and change it, which makes it a real bitch.

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I tend to disagree, this is no doubt the best piece of work that he has done, and is shoulders above other amateur productions i have heard. Keep at it dave, got with ure gut mate cause to me i thourougly enjoy it

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Oh, life is bigger ,It's bigger than you,And you are not me,The lengths that I will go to, The distance in your eyes ,Oh no, I've said too much, I set it up

That's me in the corner, That's me in the spotlight, I'm Losing my religion, Trying to keep up with you ,And I don't know if I can do it, Oh no, I've said too much,I haven't said enough, I thought that I heard you laughing, I thought that I heard you sing, I think I thought I saw you try.

But that was just a dream, That was just a dream, But that was just a dream, Try, cry, why try? That was just a dream ,Just a dream, just a dream, Dream

Hey man
What did you use to make this?
Nice work and good luck.


Ralph.

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shit nigga, handy piece of work! a lotta good suggestions being given here but i actually like it the way it currently stands... unless you feel you can improve it dave.

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lower the curtain down on memphis
lower the curtain down on me...

i used to vsti synths and fruityloops studio for sequencing, mixed it all in wave lab. 100% software on this =).

ps. i sent it in the mail on the weekened, cost me $35 bucks to get to holland but itll be there in time for the competition this week.

fingers crossed..

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did you end up making any alterations?
not that u had to.
its all subjective, all upon tastes really.

g'luck and all the best for it tho.

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i think it sounds pretty good dave, you've done well

PS
change your avatar!

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new set online, Summer Journeys

well i enjoyed that

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Nice work mate!

Good luck in the comp...