(Well, it sounds exactly like any other track right now since I'm on my crappy headphones)
Anyways, on to the tune:
I must say this isn't my cup of tea. The intro drags a bit too much for my liking and the melodies sound quite simple. (Not too fond of the melody as a whole either)
I guess it's fine for the style it's in but it just doesn't appeal to me.
i really like the intro. it's weird, but i like it. omg at 4:30. effects in this tune are great. i agree that the percussion is a bit lacking. good work
Aug-11-2003 20:26
gibbo
Electro Retro
Registered: Oct 2001
Location: Darlington
Top class production as always not quite as keen on this as nudawn but its still totally mint i love it
Aug-11-2003 21:26
Fundamental
Still Alive in '25
Registered: Apr 2001
Location: Scotland
I'm really lovin this. The melody is so damn catchy.
Great work, nothing more to say...
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Aug-12-2003 09:25
goldenarmZ
Monkey Elemental
Registered: Mar 2001
Location: secret
Good stuff
I particularly like the synths in the intro and the one that starts around 4:30.
The melody is very well written too.. flows really nicely.
I reckon (as a few others have said) it could do with a bit more percussion work to give the track a bit more groove, and make it stand out individually. Maybe a few more effects and 'whooshing' type sounds in the beginning to build the track up to the breakdown too.
I really liked it tho - thumbs up.
Aug-12-2003 12:24
dj_ryan
tranceaddict in training
Registered: Aug 2003
Location: Canberra, Australia
great tune man... i'm envious of ur talent
Aug-12-2003 12:48
eLe_vatE
protected
Registered: Jan 2002
Location: tulse hell
thanks for all the feedback guys & gals, well have another look at the percs and see if we can beef them up a bit
now about this 'simple' melody....
Well I definitely like it better than that last one (redawn?? nudawn??)
Hmm, about the intro, I think the synths sound a bit too stabby for an intro, but thats just my personal opinion. I like how the percs are introduced, and I think they are quite well done.
Loove the bassline, really nice. Like how some more percs are added, not just thrown in all of a sudden. At the same time, the way they just slowly build in volume is really nice I think.
In the breakdown I think it would be nice if the drumroll was more accented (or just crisper/louder). And it wouldn't hurt to throw some nice big crashes in there.
Overall, nice tune, great effects...
Can't wait to see what happens with the remixes
Caleb
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Aug-12-2003 23:00
DRM
I Choose Noise
Registered: Mar 2001
Location: Somewhere where it's raining
Right finally got my internet back from that gay as fuck virus goin round so thought id comment on this now.
will start with stuff i dont like. I dont like how the percussion is faded in at the start, sounds kinda gay to me. tho i dont agree with the people sayin the percussion aint good cuz there aint nothing wrong with it in my ears. although this is prob a first i do agree with wim a little on the fact that the main lead does sound a little 3osc'y but i guess thats kinda the elude style and i cant say i dont use it aswell!
and thats about it for the stuff im not that keen on. All the rest is fuckin awesome. Some of the effects and random noises you guys have come up with are utterly stunning. i really like the melodies goin on and like duncan said (i think) its all fits the name really well (which is always gonna get u signed )
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