criticism i can take... but to go as far as to mock me is just un called for... i understand what you mean about ppl not seeing the same image as me... and thats why i posted it... but frankly to have me mocked... i just wont take that... specially something so pure and from my heart...

Yeah that isnt cool. Basically, I think poetry makes a lot of guys uncomfortable in some way, so they laugh about it. I dunno. Im in a weird mood.


The falling rain created echoes of silence in the darkness of my mind
The tears of heaven streaked along the glass, matched by twin rivers coursing down the other side.
Red, bleary eyes stare blankly through the mist, the mind shrouded in a darkness more complete than a storm could ever create.
Fingernails split and rip back as splinters from the windowframe drive home the worthlessness of existence.
There was no pain in that overloaded mind, a glazed examination of the crimson flow yielded a birdlike twist of the neck.
As the blood clotted beneath the shrieking skies, a mind went silent for the last time, utter peace washed over, and those eyes would see no more pain.

yeah, that about sums up my mood. Im not depressed at all hehe, im actually about to go work out, but I dunno. Deep thoughts this morn.

strip club strip club for where are thy
strip club strip club shot jism in my eye

i wish i were a bird sooaring thru the sky
i wish i was a snake slithering into ur behind
i wish i was a dolphin swimming so free
but im nothing but a pimp so bitch get on ur knees
i wish i was batman no i wish i was robin
fuck them both cause im robbin with a bat man
ii wish i was a caped crusader
i wish i had a penis shaped like darth vader
but i guess im not that far off cause im a heavy breathing masterbater

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Originally posted by ratz *poem removed to save what dignity i have left*

Poor guy.