SAMPLE 1:im impressed. personally i like the chords u got. my pointers are;

*stretch intro
*before introducing the final riff add breakdown beginning with some large sweeping, harmonising chords which would be good, then introducing the riff over the top

otherwise top notch m8y!

SAMPLE 2: i loved the start but i preferes the riff on the first sample :]

all in all keep up the good work!

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Last edited by >everest< on Jul-19-2001 at 20:17

It's not bad dave....definately keep doin what you're doing....

I do agree with it sounding dark and the turning happy
it doesn't mix very well.........I have a question......
I'm a new user of fruity loops....I'm workin on a kickass dark beat right now.....but I also have a synth....and I was wondering if I could sample sounds from my synth and use it on the role piano?
will the piano pick up all the notes?

hmm, try right clicking on the step sequencer on a channel button then goto 'insert channel', then select 'MIDI OUT'
have a play with that, im not sure how to set up the rest since i don't have a keyboard but there is a button or something around there which lets you play and it will pick it up and lay it out on the piano roll

hope this helps

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here's a new one for you all.. it has a sad sort of tune to it at the moment, this will probably change later on. Also it's not done yet so cut me a bit of slack :P
i have yet to add the main synth and probably re-arrange the track and add more effects etc.

again I used only fruityloops and nothing else.

http://smellybin.com/smp/dave%20b%2...e)20-07-01).mp3

please comment!

-- sorry if it takes ages to download.. its 192kbps (sounds really gay any lower) and your downloading it from my cable server. --

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Last edited by Serp on Jul-20-2001 at 11:57

Any1 know where i cna download a full version of Fruityloops coz i have just tried it and im well impressed

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Originally posted by KevinExcite It's not bad dave....definately keep doin what you're doing.... I do agree with it sounding dark and the turning happy it doesn't mix very well.........I have a question...... I'm a new user of fruity loops....I'm workin on a kickass dark beat right now.....but I also have a synth....and I was wondering if I could sample sounds from my synth and use it on the role piano? will the piano pick up all the notes?

i dont really get q... if u want 2 use yur sounds from yur synth and make the melody with the piano roll, u just record it, then cut it with cool edit or something like that, then u import it 2 fruity... if u want 2 play the melody on yur syntyh, hook it up to the midi controller and select some stuff in fruity.. ( read the help file )
hope this cleared everything up

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Hey Dave.. Just to introduce myself, my name is Eclipse and I've been producing trance for about 2 years now.

I like the tune.. It has alot of potential.. I think you should incorporate a deep bassline at the beginning (after the 16th beat).. The bassline is what will get a club/party going.

I also think that the sound that you are using for the melody is very good, but as you know, the melody needs some work.

Add a nice thick uplifting rise and a conclusion, and you have yourself a great demo.

Peace,
Eclipse.

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Hey guys, thanks for all your comments!

Just did another beat!.. remix of an earlier tune i was working on
it's a very upbeat hard house tune 143bpm, yet to make the rest of it.

http://www.smellybin.com/smp/daveb-demo3.mp3

Please tell me what you think

P.S It's only 296kb @ 160kbps 15secs.. heheh


(You may see this same post in a new thread i created, but noone went to it!)

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Good beat db... I like.

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Originally posted by E-Klips Good beat db... I like.

ty ty !

'essence' is almost complete.. you can download the latest promo release right here:
daveb__essence_(promo_(incomplete)_26-07-01)v2.mp3

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