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Originally posted by Fundamental Hello This is my first attempt at production of any form (be nice), so I hope you can take the time to listen and pass me some comments. Cheers!

Incredible! For a first production this is really great - you're got some good ideas, really nice melodies.. A lot of potential here!

Comparing it to my first productions, it makes them look shite!

I'll let you know tomorrow. It's bed time now.

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Originally posted by MK-S Incredible! For a first production this is really great - you're got some good ideas, really nice melodies.. A lot of potential here! Comparing it to my first productions, it makes them look shite!

Thanks mate. This is really encouraging to hear. I'm feeling more confident about starting some else now.

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Very good for a first production, got all the right elements there, and the overall sound is neat & clean.
My only 2 gripes are that the bassdrum is a tad too loud and its a bit repetative, but I cant really fault it for a first track

Look forward to hearing more of your future tracks

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Originally posted by Bren-F Very good for a first production, got all the right elements there, and the overall sound is neat & clean. My only 2 gripes are that the bassdrum is a tad too loud and its a bit repetative, but I cant really fault it for a first track Look forward to hearing more of your future tracks

Cheers Bren!

I did have some problems balancing out the levels, but I think it helps to have and objective ear listen in. Will try and sort it out.

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Very promising stuff for a first track, I must say!

Could use a bit more perc/synth elements but compared to my first productions this is lightyears ahead.

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well mate this is very good for your 1st attempt

the percussion so far is quite good, needs thickened up a bit maybe add a few more things to it but nice in general

the melody aint too bad, with some work it could be rather good IMO

i do like the synth youve used for the melody

the structure could be better but that will come with experience

overall great 1st attempt

keep up the good work

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as i said, really like it for one of your first tracks. really good.

bumping this on top so more ppl can hear

cheers

Hey you know this is a damn good track for your first time, WTF. I think i might even spin this one day.

Mike

Cheers for the comments Nik, Martin, Endre. Much appreciated guys!!

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Originally posted by DJMikeyP Hey you know this is a damn good track for your first time, WTF. I think i might even spin this one day. Mike

Haha Mikey! If you're ever mad enough to, then give me a shout...

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Hey sorry for the delay....

Good track here m8, all the comments I was goign to make have been made so, soz

Good effort though, your coming on strong!

Shep

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this is looking pretty good for your first track
although like other people said, that bassdrum needs a bit more variation =)
looks like you have the right idea with all the elements you throw in there. amazing for your first production. fuckin amazing for the first one.
the kick is at bit too hard, i think, might want to ease that one up.
how long were you practicing on reason before you did this? i cant even figure that program out myself, but i got fruity pretty down. anyways, keep on practicing. i never thought i could do what i can today, but ya, improvement comes in great steps, and dont be afraid to try new stuff, just to see how it sounds =).