Thanks!

Hmmm, you know maybe I'll change the lead.. One thing I don't like is that the baseline sounds too "Happy" any tips on finding more Dramatic baselines?

ok.. with your apology in mind, i will give a quick opinion of what i think


the pads start off very nicely...

however, the beat/bass/main synth just basically kinda turned me off by this track a lot...

to me, this track sounds kinda retro... but i don't like retro and really think that this track could help if it had a better melody...

just my honest 2 cents

hello, nectario! how r u?

well, your song is too much ´dance´ too me - sorry - but I just can´t help remember dance songs when I hear these basic chord sequence. (those 80´s tunes - Corona, Snap, IceMc, etc - listen to these so u will known what I´m talking about)

in my opinion, when you decide to use more than one chord in a song it has to bem very well chosen or it will break the trance state, falling into a linear pattern instead of a cycle one.

and then, all phun is gone, if you know what I mean.

additional comments have already been made by other fellows, so that´s it.

hope it helped. keep on!

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Thanks to all of you for your reviews! I really appreciate it...

I am not sure if I should dump this track altgother and start a new one (with your suggestions in mind) or just work on this one...

I'll probably dump it.. It was my first attempt to create something with more melody... Hopefully you will like my next song more!

Thanks again!

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Originally posted by Mike_B found it cheesy, needs more depth to it or something, the first half before you introduce that piano sounds like it would fit well in an old atari video game.

This sounds alright but like Mike_B said to much atari sound and the beat doesnt seem to be in depth enough. Seems to have to much of a happy hardcore feel with little emotion.

I can say that the piano is great...mostly because piano in trance is awesome....but I like the sound of it and the pace.

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What else do you need.....

dude the only thing that i liked is the piano ...
other then that u have a long way 2 go...

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The intro pad is nice and warm, that's good.

The percussions are super limited; they sound like something from 12 years ago. You need about 6 more percussive layers.

The bass sound is uh, dunno, but I don't like it much. Try a different sound.

I don't like the first synth that comes in, but that's personal taste. As others have mentioned this is a very "clubdancey" tune, and I hate those for the most part.

The synth at 1:50 is not good IMO.

2:20 is just way too happy sounding for me.


Well, this is totally not my cup of tea. The production on it, aside from the percussions, is pretty good though.

In theory what you've written is very good and some of the parts I really like. They also gel well together. Needs more of a drive though, work on the bassline, what you use here already would be better as an additional synth and something heavier in it's place to push the track along. Also maybe beef the percussion up just a tad. But yeah generally quite good, keep it up.

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