This is damn good! I'm not sure whether I agree with others about the high-pitched synth - in fact, I quite like the randomness of it. But I'm sure whatever changes you make will be for the better.

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its a pretty good song. id have to agree with those above; i dont think the high-pitched synths sound nice. other than that the song is nice. i really like the beat A LOT... the kick, hihat, and clap. they mesh real nice with each other. the melody is impressive. i like it. the intro is good, maybe a little to long with no kick. the outro needs to be tightened a little bit. think about how people would mix this song, the outro of this song would be really hard for some people to mix since the melody is still going on. but other djs, the real good ones, shouldnt have a problem. overall, the song is real good. id say it would be ready for a professional release soon. great job. i like it a lot.

yep, good stuff, not exactly the kind of music that i like but this has loads of energy! just one tip, the main lead sounded a bit too panned on headphones, i'd advice you to reduce a little bit the panning there as it is a bit annoying.

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holy shit thats awesome... im dying to have this song in better quality

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oh and.. i go for those high pitched synth sounds for some reason.. just brings up the energy imo

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Amazing tune but god damn it need a better cleaner verison

Agreed,

You have a really good track on the way there. Just a couple things that do stand out IMO. First up as others have said there is a high pitched synth that needs to be changed etc. Then there is also something going on with the beat. On every other kick there is a kind of fudging sound that makes it sound very dirty (in a bad way). Perhaps it's just the quality of the recording and my speakers that are not doing it justice. It's more prominent at the end of the track.

Overall a fanstastic energy to this track which would work on most dancefloors me thinks.

Keep up the good work
Nem

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