Yeah, it certainly wasn't my intention, but it sounds sorta like a cross between Naked Angel and the Sensation Anthem, hehe.

Nice work man!
I'm not really fan of this kick,but anyway it sounds not too bad.
Keep it up !

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its pretty cool

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i like it, very dreamy sorta trance, maybe harden it up a bit to make it drive more

Madness, luvin it.

luv to do a remix so if youre interested pm me.

Tezz

sounds massive indeed. great melody mate.

Not bad at all man!
I really like the sounds you used in there, seems like that atmosphere vst is pretty massive...

The melody is great, love the chord progression, the bass could be abit harder and maybe higher in volume.
The kick sounds abit to hard, not enough percussion imo...

Good job man! keep working on it, and it will turn out great.

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Thanks for the comments thus far guys, I really appreciate it. I updated the link with a new 6 minute clip of the track which is more or less complete now.

I liked the first version a lot better - but this one is more driving so I suppose it just depends on your taste in music.. sounds good none the less

But, the intro to the first version seemed a little amateur with it going right into the pad then the melody.. the way the new version goes into it is better structure-wise. I like this one a lot, I'm definitly going to keep it (I don't keep many tracks that I listen to on here)

B.T.W. - the kick on this is much better then on Land Dweller - Rock the Cradle (Preview) - this kick isn't clipping at all.. good job with the mastering!

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Well, I started creating the track with the breakdown part, so that's what the first sample was always meant to be -- the middle of the track. This is the exact same thing really except with an intro to it now, hehe.

I've spent many hours with PAZ fired up on pro productions to see what's going on with their frequencies and how they keep things balanced out, and that work is starting to pay off a little.

Thanks for the comments

nice job. master, press, ship!

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Originally posted by dj-sean I've spent many hours with PAZ fired up on pro productions to see what's going on with their frequencies and how they keep things balanced out, and that work is starting to pay off a little. Thanks for the comments

got any general tips/hints or patterns u see various artists use?

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