sounds pretty cool to me

start is a little empty + the xtra bassline at 59 seconds is a wee bit fuzzy + muddy.

the original elements are really original, nice to hear a new sound

i think the main lead lacks the power the build + percs deserve, try a detuned lead with less delay, it may work but i dunno.

it does need to try and climax as john said, not just come in with a sly snare roll, it deserves better! but im sure that can be easily fixed

i reakon the lead is a wee bit too loud and needs to be backed up by a secondary lead of sorts

after another listen going back to the breakbeat as i was unure on the first listen, i like it heh

as with all shiat i like, if possible get me a decent mp3 or cdr and i will give it a blast on tranceairwaves in the new year

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one word... Nawice! pretty good track u got there man. *adds track to playlist* as I was listening to the track, the background FX from bout 1:30-2:30 sound like those little toys that make funny sounds when u tip em over lol. Sounds pretty cool anyways... Although you may not take my comments that seriously since I am like the only freakin guy from Texas posting on TA, I think ur track is quite better than some of the live tracks I hear on the Sat. night show broadcast live from the Roxy ;-)
good luck,
Jake

First of all Thanks to DJ Kreing for hosting my file!
Thanks everybody for the feedbacks and comments , I realy appreciate it! I've fixed the break kick, and low the hits abit. Oh, Im gona upload the 192k later at night for those who want, i'll pm you guys.
Laters.
EM.

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Last edited by EternalMusic on Dec-18-2003 at 10:35

can u get me a copy as well?

grate tune dude ....

like others said it original and well pruduced

spacialy like the bass line...

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