first one is really good, i like the melody.
the bassline is a bit too prominent though, but that could be the mp3 quality..

i agree somewhat with tranc3 and omegasox for the second one, although to me the transition isn't really that harsch.. but i do agree you should work more around that deeper part in the beginning.
oh yeah, and the bassline rocks!

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There´s a problem with the link with the first track (with the spaces). "Save Target As" won´t work you have to copy the link and past em into a new browser window.

I am downloading the tunes right now will comment later

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right click save as both work either someone fixed or your browser is messed. Or if it don't, copy paste as ^ did.

First track, yeah, its good. Its your basic uplifter, sounds good.

Second track, the intro sounds niccceeee! I actually like the bassline and what develops after the 1 min mark, contrary to popular demand. Perhaps, time pending, you go with what you got and see where it goes, and a second track following the advice of others here and see which sounds better.

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