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As I said before, I think that it's a cracking track that deserves to be signed.
However with the vocal. First up, male vocals are not popular in trance music full stop. This is an opinion that is shared with all the DJs I know (And I know stacks of them).
I think the problem with the vocal is that it doesn't match the general vibe of the track. The background has a more mystical feel while the vocal is played to often and just makes the track seem naff in my opinion.
Perhaps if you had a female vocal that was more of a whisper you would match the vibe better? Also less often as it tends to repeat too much. Makes you think, 'yeah yeah, I remember now shut up'. 
Please don't take this as an attack on your ability or anything like that as it's not meant that way. But I do think a female vocal would be far more suitable.
The fact that the labels are getting back to you is excellent and it shows they know a good track when they hear it.
Cheers
Nem
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