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Originally posted by paranoik0 nice, percs sound very clear, but as everyone said a little bit of a melodic element (or a dull synth) could improve it. or if you want to keep it as an exclusively percussive track, try a bit more variation, or even some wild filtering to make it stand out

That pretty much sums it up Good job.

cheers for the comments people much appreciated

im currently in the process of updating the song at the moment

added another synthy picotto esque sub bass to give it more BOOM

working on a sub melody to counter the sub bass

and thinking about adding a little vocal snippet if i can find the right one lol

and as for the filtering im getting some tips on that as we speak

cheers lads!

any more?

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08/01/16

Big Dave/little Dave

I keep getting a bloody 'too many users connected' message whenever I try to download it.

Ah well, i'll keep trying.

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Originally posted by arctic I keep getting a bloody 'too many users connected' message whenever I try to download it. Ah well, i'll keep trying.

lol ill hit you on msn if you prefer

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08/01/16

Big Dave/little Dave

Unable to download it; will review when I'm able.

ok havinf some trouble ATM with the hosting

too many connections or something :S


just a quick update, song is almost finished added a rhythm synth to give it more groove so ive just to master that now

and still considering the little vocal snippets but havent got any i like ATM so i may just stick with no vocals

ill post up the new version for some reviews when the host has cooled down a bit lol

martin

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08/01/16

Big Dave/little Dave

Ah, sounds better Martin! Lovin the melody you have there now - suits the style of the track perfectly, and it seems to keep the track flowing more.

Er... Good improvement!

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Like the thought of anything dark and bangin' wasn't able to hear it though... will try again later.

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First off, thanks for the help mate, you 2 Luke

The track is sounding well, the new riff is holding its own but i think like and some have pointed out that it needs some kind of melody to finish it off! Mastering is really clean, sweet sound.

Keep workin on that hook and you could have a top track here and if i was you i would be sending it 2 ID+T

Good job mate!

Duncan

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cheers for the review dunc

ok people now just getting the hosting fixed so i can upload the updated version and get som more feedback

upload very soon

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08/01/16

Big Dave/little Dave

Excellent track really like this.

Fair play

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cheers bryan

like i say the update will be up ASAP so hopefully itll add something more to the track

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