i recently, realzied some minor bugs so it's possible the tune will get another update (possibly it will be the final version),

anyway, thank you all again for your comments,

pete

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hey mate,

sounds really chilly, anyway you should use more EQs for some track

keep doin' cool tunez,

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cool, interesting remix
i like the fx in the beginning
the melody that comes in around 1 minute gives it a very different mood from the original
the sound lacks a bit of punch, and the bassline sounds off when it kicks in around 3:30, but a good effort

keep it up

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well hot damn...everythin sounds crisper and dead onto what i think you wanted it to be. excellent remix like i said before, now just a bit clearer. the melody sounds better, did u do somethin to it?

its really good
reminds me of old school trance ;D i dunno why but it just does
all u really need to do is work on those leads a llittle and make the whole song a little louder
just some mastering
otherwise its really good
top notch!

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is it just me, coz to me it sounded awful, sounded like there was another tune playing over the top that didn't sync at all and it just sounded a mess :-/ have i got a dodgy copy or is it just me?

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its probably you.. good job on the remix.. you maybe niklas harding will play urs to.lol.. keep up the good work

Hey mate!

This sounds quite nice to me. I do have a few pointers though...

I think the overall sound of the track is quite hollow, I don't know what quite causes this, but perhap try eq'ing some brighter parts out of some synths here and there, plus some more mid levels on things like strings and pads.

I also think the sub synth (kind of metallic one) isn't always a 100% in key with the rest of the track, maybe it should follow the other melodies a bit more.

I think that's all, melodic parts seem all alright to me, just some mastering pointers. Keep it up!

Take care,
Wim

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hello!

first of all, about the comments:

fineart: thx, brother,and check out my future productions!
By the way your Oceanlab remix is excellent, the best of all, shame not releasing it!

Haak: i'm glad you like it, mate! check out the final mastered version!

Lighworks: thx, Wim for your comment, you're right about the remix, plesase check out the final version!


anyway, thank you all for your comments about my remix!

By the way, here's the final mastered version of my remix, i think it's much much better than the previous, everything sounds clearer and better, so please download it, and if you like it, feel free to play in your sets! (i would be really happy)

comments, suggestions would be appreciated,

thx,

pete

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K, this is a lot better than the first version but still could use a lot of work. For one, the kick has like no low-end and practically gets drowned out after the breakdown. Remember, this is dance music, that kick really needs to thump. That little bass type melody that comes in at 1:16 is out of key and detracts a lot from the track IMO. I'd lower the reverb on the clap and make it sharper. There's also still a lot of muddiness, especially around the 1:40 mark. Sounds like everything has too much reverb on it or something, and you can barely distinguish between the different melodic elements and the bassline.

Things to change:
Kick
Snare
Bassline (Make all of them way more crisp).

Things that are great:
Effects! (these are really good)
Ambience, buildup.

This remix has a lot of potential, and like I said just needs a bunch of cleaning up.

Cheers, keep it up.
Sean

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very nice remix good job!
what software/harware did you use??

renco

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