this is the worst melody I ever heard.

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Originally posted by Djeebie It's very deep indeed. But even after a few listens I can't say I like it. I don't know, I don't like the overall sound of the track. Production wise it's good though, so it's just a matter of personal taste

I would have to unfortunately agree with this fella. The track is mostly well produced (I could tell something wasn't right, glad there were a couple people to bring to your attention what they believe to be some issues that could use your attention).

But overall, just not my cup of tea. Don't really know, just doesn't hit me like a typical Vangelis track does. Keep at it though, I do enjoy listening to your tracks mate =)

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The first thing that got me was the drums jumping left and right. At first I thought it was cool, but the longer it goes the less I am sure. It is definitly different.

There is definitly some wrong notes in there. Not the main melody but in that sort of atmospheric synth going in the background. It is the one that really starts to get going before the 3 min mark. The clashes I really notice are at around 3:20 and 5:25 (if you can't tell that this sounds bad... I don't know, but I am worried), 5:50, 7:55, 8:20 It seems like it is in a different key than the sax. If you listen to those trouble spots closly and can't hear that something is off, I can only assume that you are tone deaf. MIDI's are not always perfect, just try to fix it and move on.

I did not notice the problems others said about high voluimes because it is 1:30 in the morning here and I can't crank it.

I really hate saxes, what can I say

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i reckon this sounds great, but like the others say there is problems especially at the 3:20 mark...really love them sax's though they are awesome...you should work a lot on this Michael and i'm sure you can make it work, still lacks a little something for me too

Well, the melody is taken from the midi as it was...But after a few listens i noticed that it doesn't sound like it should.
There's no reverb on the main drums. Yes, there is a 2/4 Pan Sweep on one of the hats, but not on the bassline....and sorry i didn't hear any problems with it....But i could imagine that this depends on the sound system you play the track on. Cause this effect can increase and decrease with the amount of Stereo or Surround Effect you use on it.

Well, forget about the remix...I'm not satisfied with it anymore. Expect better things to come

Greets,
Michi

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We need the finished and clean version of your "My Immortal" remix!! I'm in love with what you did to it! Please finish it! I would definitely pay money a clean version.


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Great work Michael, Not your best but still good none the less
Love the percussion - very well executed.
The whole track has a very deep sound to it.

Also I have to a gree with Ibiza Dreams, get My Immortal Finished !

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Originally posted by michif72 No Problem...as long as you keep listening to my tracks Maybe it'll grow on you...

Don't worry mate Both your dub and vocal remix of Linkin' Park's Numb are tunes IMO and a 'fixed' version of Evanescence's My Immortal would make it my favourite remix of Evanescence tracks

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