I agree about the delay on the bass. Not too fond of the offbeat-8th Hihat. Gets kinda repetative around 2:30. Fatten up those pads man. Might wanna try making bigger chords and filling out the lower octaves. I haven't heard the original, but nice lead. The climax feels like there is something mising, but i think part of that comes with having a shite computer. Nice work.