The bass would be lush, if only it were brought out into the mix more. The bottom end really needs more emphasis to make impact. The patches you’ve programmed for the pads and melody sound really nice, but tend to drown out the rest of the mix too much, struggling to hear the percline at all. Breakbeat during the breakdown a very nice touch.

Man this took a while to DL:

Some thing is way too reverbed at the beggining, totally drowns the bass. Clap and open HH are OK but very Fruityish ... try to modify them a bit.

Bassline is smooth, I'd give it a moer subtle entrance.

I think the track is feels too long till it reaches the break...

Buildup is fine but needs moer atmosphere IMO ... let us know that you're gonna drop the bomb

Hmmm, melody isn't that exciting for my taste but it's alright, I think there is way too much treble when the synths get combined.

Overally I'd say the big cons are the treble and the length of the tune... Worth working on though.

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