Yeah, nice tune. I like like melody a lot, but I don't like the background synth that plays from the start. I think the tune would sound better without it.

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Thanks Fundamental ... I thought it so and I think finally I change that synth to some kind of church choir.

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i feel quality here

this very kewl, just liked this clip

wanna listen to more your stuff here

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Thanks Focean! Full version coming soon

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excellent overall!

personally I like that synth that is with the entire song, it is what defines this track. that´s what I think.

also think that the sound can be cleared up abit, sounds slightly muddy when the bass kicks in.

but I can definatly see this one beeing played on the clubs.

take care,

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Originally posted by DylanSwe excellent overall! personally I like that synth that is with the entire song, it is what defines this track. that´s what I think. also think that the sound can be cleared up abit, sounds slightly muddy when the bass kicks in. but I can definatly see this one beeing played on the clubs. take care,

i agree with him, i don't find the sounds to harsh, but the mix is a bit bad, i think if you clear that up you will have some cleare sounds.

The lead i liked, and it's definitly a club tune

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Originally posted by Spin Doctor I think you could use some more variation in the drum roll, doesn’t seem to quite work well, it also doesn’t initially seem to come in quite right either. The bass tone the other end of the kick is really good though, spot on.

The DRUMROLLS are weakest part in my production skills so any help would be good

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MASSIVE84 & DylanSwe -> thanks for your comments! will check the frequencies 100% -> right now no DYNAMIC effects

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hey whats up
i like the first synth you are using, yu have a nice bassline too.
the percs are good too, but perhaps you may want to lower the volume on the synth, as it sort of drowns out the rest of the stuff you are using, quality sounds nice =)
good job, post the finsihed up =)

Wow, now I see what everyone means by make un-cliche melodies. I love the synth you used for it. I suggest you bring the kick out just a tad, it seems kind of hidden. Also the snare sounds too, dry and frooty loops like. Needs more snare-like sound, I suggest distorting it or add noise to it. Other than than, this is fukin sweet. I can't wait for the full track!

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It's a kool track man ! The noisy leads fits the rest of the track perfect IMO . It's catchy

// Jesper

I think the elements here are well produced here(lead, bass, kick, perc, etc...)

But like others said, there is a certain degree of mudiness. You need to fix the kick, it is taking up too much headroom (frequencies) and also the bass which is taking around the same frequencies as the kick and is really muddying it up. Also, you'll want to up the frequencies of the bass and give it more sparkle to it as it is a rolling bassline and plays a lot of notes fast so a deep sounding bass is no good for that.

Hope to hear some more from you and I think this is sounding quite good indeed