Wow, this has such an evil atmosphere! Really really good atmosphere
I think the intro could do with being a bit more varied...it starts of great but I kept expecting a bit more to come in....I'm thinking maybe some more percussion, in a really techy style. Not too much tho coz I think this tune comes across as pretty minimalist and it works really well.
Also the kick sounds a bit muddy (but I'll make my standard disclaimer about my stereo being shit).
Anyway I really, really like this. I think it could do with a bit more work tidying it up, maybe some EQ'ing. But it's definetly something to be proud of; very original too. If you can't be bothered to go back to it, maybe try and get a remix sorted?
Really refreshing stuff I'm going to go hide in the cupboard now
Jul-23-2004 13:04
Spin Doctor
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Jul 2001
Location: Outside Over There
Thanks for the feeedback boss!
I’ve taken all the comments on board, and you should, hopefully, see some improvement in the next couple of tunes I release...especially in the Kick Drum department! I’ve been working hard to make a collection of uber-punchy kicks (i.e. Paul Glazby style), and now I’m building some tracks around them.
had to judge it on the lo-fi file as the hifi was down
I really like the intro
cool sounds and atmosphere.. but the pitch bending sound is obviously a ripoff of johannes heil's paranoid dance which is a pitty (or you should've called it a remix -i know it's only a small sound but that is one of your major ideas of the song, so it's one of the most important lines)
The synths are pretty nice but I didn't quite like the build-up. Too slow and not much happening, maybe shorten it for 2 minutes and bring in some new elemnts ?
keep 'em coming
Yes, I did copy the idea of the wail/moan from Johannes Heil. But, I think the tunes are significantly different enough to warrant calling this one my own (I don't even know if the tunes are in the same Key, or even if the wail is the same note or anything), and not a remix. I kept the name though to show where I got the idea from. And In any event, I seem to remember that Heil borrowed that from an old Hardcore/Ravey track, though I could be wrong on that.
I'm going to go hide in the cupboard now 
(or you should've called it a remix -i know it's only a small sound but that is one of your major ideas of the song, so it's one of the most important lines)
