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too much going on i think, it sounds a bit like u have just stuck sounds in there for the sake of filling up space, and alot of the notes sound somewhat random. The bass is nice. i like the sound. but u can tell that the rest of the sounds are presets and samples and u really need to get out of that habbit, its not good practice. The bass drop is good, could be longer, but its very effective. This tune works best when there is less going on i think, like towards the end, it sounds mint. very nice. too much going on in the rest of it. watch the key clashes, there are ALOT of them, and it ruins it i think. try and un-randomify some of the notes , i personally love the kick, its punchy and very present, makes it move. its nice.
keep up the good work. start using ur own sounds tho i think it is quite disapointing that u still use presets.
mike
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