Registered: Feb 2004
Location: The Pelican Nebula (IC 5070)
This sounds really good in my ears.
The melody is great, maybe some changes in it so it doesn't get so boring throughout the track. Else, it does sound very good to me.
The pads, drums and hats are also very nicely done.
Wonderful track, good job!
Jun-30-2004 13:39
JamieShanley
Junior tranceaddict
Registered: Jul 2004
Location: Newcastle, UK
This has a nice melody and starts off promisingly. I quite enjoyed it...but I do think its a bit repetitive. The breakdown is something of a let down after such a promising build-up. Its got some nice parts to it - loving the echoey haunting effect you've put in around 4:58. That would sound immense on a big speaker system.
I would play it out though cos its got the makings of a very good track!
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Jul-11-2004 09:47
Derosas
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: Apr 2004
Location: Back in Portland, OR usa
Thanks JamieShanley and everyone else for your comments. You all have reassured me and inspired me to keep producing. As I am sure you know, producing is a long a difficult learning path, I'm glad to see I have improved... You should have heard one of my tracks from two years ago
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