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fitom tiel
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Registered: Apr 2003
Location: down in it

where you at all influenced by him?




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Originally posted by Zenchowdah
Perhaps there was no fornication? Perhaps he was a result of this thing, one of these test tube babies that he had read about. The religious fanatics were having a field day with it, saying that it created people without souls. The religious fanatics also thought that a big cloud of air called God cared where you were on Sunday at 8 am. Last Sunday at 8 am, Jimmy was at church. Against his will, but, young as he was, his aunt could, and often did force him to do a large number of things. Sometimes he went along with it to avoid confrontation. Sometimes he went against it just to define his, and her, limits. He thought about the test tube baby possibility. He compared it to his feelings of duality toward the human race. If the religious fanatics were right, he should be without a soul. He looked for the nearest mirror, and found one in a bathroom on the second floor of the dingy house. Caked with dust, as the aunt could never be asked to perform physical labor, and since Jimmy was too short, he was unable to clean it himself. Grabbing a chair from the hall, he got up tall enough to see himself, and he look into his own eyes. Infinity was the first word that came to his mind. It was confusing to think that he was looking at himself looking at himself. This kind of thing made his head and his ego hurt, because he could not comprehend it. He found solace in the fact that he was but seven, and had a lot of learning to do, but also scorned himself for not having acquired this knowledge previously.


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Zenchowdah
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quote:
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where you at all influenced by him?


a little bit, i think. i recently read Brave New World.


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1. Why did you use the word 'Jimmy' 36 times?

2. In 1966 bill gates net worth was zero? 'The woman ...had a cholesterol level near that of Bill Gates' net worth.' Anyway that line is 100% cheese.


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I read that one, good stuff. He should wake up and its all a dream...ahahhaha just kidding.

I dunno, play with the idea of him being some sort of spiritual conduit?? He doesnt believe in religion etc, but is forced to, and gets weird images and stuff in his brain that he comes to realize are seperate from him. Takes him on a spiritual journey, but only too late did he realize that not all spirits are benevolent?

I dunno, Im a fantasy writer, I cant handle real world stuff

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Spad
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Registered: Jun 2001
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I agree with the 2nd point igottaknow made.

If I was writing this I would fast foward 15 years, to a point where Jimmy has learned to integrate into society (maybe some flashbacks to a youth detention centre, introduce a character who helped him).

Maybe have him using his intelligence to try and understand the human mind and human interactions, but in a really fucked up way (experimenting on runaway orphan kids or something I dunno).

Is he an Aspergian?

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Zenchowdah
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Registered: Jul 2003
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well, i got the idea for the story when it occurred to me that a seven year old kid that went out, killed a bunch of people, and dragged them back to his/her house for a tea party could be very entertaining. Given, ihavent got to that point in this story yet, but thats why he's young.


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fitom tiel
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quote:
Originally posted by Zenchowdah
well, i got the idea for the story when it occurred to me that a seven year old kid that went out, killed a bunch of people, and dragged them back to his/her house for a tea party could be very entertaining. Given, ihavent got to that point in this story yet, but thats why he's young.


you should watch the movie 'May'. not really related, but along those lines. psychologically.


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