That riff is awesome and really different - love it!!

Yep you can probs lose the windchimes and the electro style beats in the break and then it could be awesome. Those hihats are a bit piercing too - it could be a massive tune though m8 deffo needs finishing

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sounds good

there's a modified (still incomplete) version at http://www.audiopioneers.net/forum/showthread.php?t=443

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That synth that comes in at 2:15 is really lush.

Really nice melody, sounds original. The only thing I hate about this song is the way it stops suddenly. Finish it damn you! I'm looking forward to hearing the rest.

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wow, that's the kind of stuff i like.
a little bit tribal(ish) with a wonderfull relaxed melody. the panpipe is gorgeous. strings are good, too. solid sounds overall. please finish this song.

This track is a great start. Really like the flute sound and like the atmospheric pad in the breakdown. But as Sunquest mentioned, there is something that makes it sound a little "weird" or off starting at :55 sec into this sample. Maybe caused by the combination of sounds that are not well sequenced with each other, or just simply not a good combination. Can't wait to hear the final version.

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Gotta agree with TOR about the bells, I think the track would sound better without them.

I think all ideas are nice, especially the mood of the track, which is calm and easy. I do think it needs some more elements though, cause at times it sounded a bit empty.

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Good melody, but sounds very computerely! There are a lot of lacks of this track!!

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Hey!!!!

For me your track is quite, quite.
Bass, pads are good, melo is quite shine.

Greetings and bow in to my post

http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...threadid=196161

Sunclyder

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Hats are very harsh sounding, I also agree with the fact that the chimes aren't the best and would sound better without them! Electro beats I like, fits in well with the track. Obviously since its WIP I wont comment on the production.

Overall mate would like to see this finished!

Shep

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