Ok : the start pad should be louder, the lead which cames at 55' can be more filtered (or just change him, I'm in "Sawerdose" ) ... The clap seems a bit cheese (the reverb ?), your drums should be more deep, they are few, add some Open Hat and flanged Ride or some tribal rythms (congas, bongos...)...
One other thing, your bassline is "muffled", equalize me that !
Nice work, good melody and clean stuff...
Aug-14-2004 23:37
Shemeck
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Jun 2003
Location: Miami
about female vocal ask user anuneventrade she claims that she can sing
btw. Where can we buy your tracks on vinyls?
Aug-15-2004 01:46
Sunquest
Just Be
Registered: Jan 2004
Location: Thornhill,Toronto, Canada
quote:
Originally posted by Polak
about female vocal ask user anuneventrade she claims that she can sing
btw. Where can we buy your tracks on vinyls?
ill ask her, tnx for letting me know
as for buying in vinyl hehe, theres nothing on vinyl yet, just taking some time
ill let u know when theres soemthing official...
very nice little track...just please filter the synth that
comes around 0:55
keep it up!
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Aug-15-2004 16:13
carl-b.mine.nu
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: Dec 2003
Location: Gothenburg, Sweden
Hey there Sunquest!
Great work on the tune! Tho I dont like that saw-lead which follows the tune all the way.. it sounds way to boring.. I would have tried something more atmospheric... other than that it's very good!
- Carl B
Aug-16-2004 19:40
Lew.D
tranceaddict
Registered: Mar 2003
Location: Melbourne, Aus
i see a definite seven cities armin mix inspired start here..
ok, really love the intro.. sounds like a brilliant set-opener.
at saw lead that comes in.. i think it's too much contrast than the soft atmospheric sound you created before it... i would maybe use a stacatto sine/pulse wave with delay&verb...
loved how the saw lead come in through the breakdown but again i feel it doesnt agree with everything else you've created..maybe some detune or something as well... the synth that comes in at 4:25 ish sounds really nice, but would sound even better with a louder/stronger bass when it kicks in with the perc again.
as has been the general trend with previous comments i think you should really work at this, make some polishes, and you'll have a great tune.
) ... The clap seems a bit cheese (the reverb ?), your drums should be more deep, they are few, add some Open Hat and flanged Ride or some tribal rythms (congas, bongos...)...
