HI evrybody!Just downloaded this track!
I have in general 3 points here.
1)The BassDrum to my mind seems to be out of mix and is to weak to be a bassdrum.I aslo find the clap sound to be smth like oldfashion stuff.
2)i can't hear any bass line here.
3)Pads and strings should be more stereo in my opinion.

All in all it is a very good track with some small things to be reworked a bit.

PS. it is only my point of view.

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the synths are not big enough to get the atmosphere you want to reach with your song...

IMO the melody has to much disharmonies...

btw: is there a bassdrum

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hello Pete,

Sorry for the bit delay.

What I'd like to outline about your remix. You have done some kinda magic with that pad. Really impressive. Quite pro stuff. Eqing and fxes are ok.

What I can advice you to try a make different notes of the main arpeggio lead and gain up the drums a bit. Maybe more percussion is needed. After the breakdown the main should grab you. It is not like that, however it is pretty nice.

I love that you've done overall. Keep up the good work, you are heading to the professional scene. I have been listening to your suffs, this remix is really cool. I cannot advice you anything do it your way and you are gonna get there soon. Like your style.

Fineart

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Anyway I agree with Leonid, quite useful advices.

Fineart

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good points steve. i think you should go smack your bro though, he's having a bit of a giggle fit. hehe.

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Originally posted by DjCommisad good points steve. i think you should go smack your bro though, he's having a bit of a giggle fit. hehe.

hahaha

anyway, thanks for all the suggestions guys, it helps me a lot!

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Originally posted by ilovetrance18 hahaha anyway, thanks for all the suggestions guys, it helps me a lot!

gimme pete! rawr! lol

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I love it so far, it has a lovely atmosphere although the pads could be just a little softer imo. But they're still great.

Claps coming in at 1:30 could use some more editing I think, feels like it stands out more than it should, I dunno, maybe...
I love the melody, and the synths are great. I don't think the kicks should be much stronger, but it could be better.

Overall I think this one has great potential, and could be one of your better works with the right touch. Like someone said, it has some magical stuff , keep the good work up m8!

Sounds great, love the pads. There are a few conflicting notes i noticed like at 0:56, something goes wrong with a low note or something.

I'd use some choruses and such to fatten up some of your leads if I were you...and some awesome suggestions have already been made by other folks as well! Follow those and I think you'll have a great track when you're all finished.

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thanks guys for all your comments!

it helps me a lot!

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