sounds really clean and professional to me. really catchy riff too. keep up this standard and send off to some labels, i'm sure they'd be interested in this one.

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sounds really clean and professional to me. really catchy riff too. keep up this standard and send off to some labels, i'm sure they'd be interested in this one.

ok, I shall try it... thanks for ur opinion!

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i like it. has energy. good melody, good lead. the bassline works. the percs work too, was borderline for me but i decided they work (taste mostly..seems a tad muddy, but they still work very well!).

only thing at all i'd take a second look at is when you introduce the lead at 1:10ish. sounds a bit off the way it's brought in, even though it makes sense afterwards how you play it out. the track feels like a buildup there, but the lead doesn't come in as a buildup. perhaps double it up or increase its tempo for the very short duration that its there as a buildup, and maybe make one small change with the bassline or something right at the phrase to distract while you change the lead back to the way you use it throughout the track.

that's the only suggestion i can make, hehe.

otherwise, great stuff.

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i like it. has energy. good melody, good lead. the bassline works. the percs work too, was borderline for me but i decided they work (taste mostly..seems a tad muddy, but they still work very well!). only thing at all i'd take a second look at is when you introduce the lead at 1:10ish. sounds a bit off the way it's brought in, even though it makes sense afterwards how you play it out. the track feels like a buildup there, but the lead doesn't come in as a buildup. perhaps double it up or increase its tempo for the very short duration that its there as a buildup, and maybe make one small change with the bassline or something right at the phrase to distract while you change the lead back to the way you use it throughout the track. that's the only suggestion i can make, hehe. otherwise, great stuff.

hey mate, u post here GOOD suggestion, hehe ... and im happy that u like it... thanx a lot!

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welcome to TA

my comments on ur track:

-wow nice kick and percs...great start
-decent bassline, if a litte high pitched..but i like it.
-nice sync, good pads...nice acidy fx.
-i like the lead pluck..kinda solid globe style.
-all kicks back in nice, got a good lead-kinda saw-y.
-a good melody too!

this track has potential if some of the production was tightened up,perhaps some of the mid taken down and boost the low end.

for me this is the most potential ive seen from the new TA members
8/10

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welcome to TA my comments on ur track: -wow nice kick and percs...great start -decent bassline, if a litte high pitched..but i like it. -nice sync, good pads...nice acidy fx. -i like the lead pluck..kinda solid globe style. -all kicks back in nice, got a good lead-kinda saw-y. -a good melody too! this track has potential if some of the production was tightened up,perhaps some of the mid taken down and boost the low end. for me this is the most potential ive seen from the new TA members 8/10

Thanks for warm reception ...

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Last edited by Action Level on Aug-24-2004 at 16:57

Track is good! Sounds like Above&Beyond style! Very good work!
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All in all it sounds really good...

But here the negative points:
- the bass drum has a small reverb (?) - I myself don't like it...
- Don't (try to) fade in every new instrument !!
- Sounds too much "Preset-Like". You took too much factory presets. I think i can hear the Albino


Anyway... go on! You have very very more possibilities!

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- Sounds too much "Preset-Like". You took too much factory presets. I think i can hear the Albino

From 8 synths only one "Preset-Like", others has made itself and there no Albino. well thanks too

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