Well yeah, kick sounds a bit ordinary, but it doesn't bother me at all at this point. Percusion is nice, and the FX are awesome.
Bass is a bit ordinary, and the kick bass combination doesn't work very well here, imo they simply don't fit. Changing kick or some heavy playing with FX would be needed. Try some compression on the kick to squeeze it a bit. Otherwise the tune is very well put togeter, I like such slow and timey buildups.
Breaky is tasty The first melo, with that sttuter efect, is very nice, tho you might want to lower a volume of sttuters a bit to distinguish them from actual notes.... might work better.
The main melody is great, like it alot with that phasing. Could be a little tiny bit louder to stand out more.
Outro comes in standard fashion.. nothing breathtaking.
Overall: a very nice track, enjoying it, just try to proffesionalize the kick and bass

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Last edited by Reconceal on Sep-05-2004 at 17:33

ok... listening to it right now...

kick seems fine to me but i would prefer if the kick had a bit more of a tail to have more of a bass...

Percussion is well done here and is top notch. Pads are top notch as well and really add to the atmosphere. I also love the fx in this. The synths are good as well but i think there are room for improvement... they sound a bit ordinary. Bass is a bit ordinary as well and i think it would sound better with a rolling bassline.

All in all, I think this might be a nice ASOT tune if it is fixed up a bit and you take all the suggestions mentioned in thsi thread into consideration


good job! I really like this

uhhm, hmm, this is nice, but i doesn't work for me completely but i do love the lead tho, maybe it needs some more listens to sink in, anyways, cheers

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ok cheers for all the comments..

seems some like it some not, i actually did so it's ok.

no more remixes but more originals maybe 2 or 3 .

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Originally posted by Octanesyco Greetings. My name is Casey. You can call me Moose. -Moose

lovin it.. nice work.. i havent had a chance to play around with reason yet. I dont have the time to play.

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opening perc and fx are so coooool!!!!
lovin it already. the kick is rox.
continuous perc and fx variation sounds very pro lovely work
bass and plucky synth sound fantastic.

perc is still sounding really good... great eq'ing, very crisp open hat
breakdown now... gated choirish synth is great over the filtering pad.
as to melody in the breakdown... harpy synth sounds awesome but i'[m not a fan of those crescendo rolls in there... makes me think of cj stone...

build is awesome when it all kicks in it works really well

very nice work
This is indeed a Massive tune

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Originally posted by Lew.D opening perc and fx are so coooool!!!! lovin it already. the kick is rox. continuous perc and fx variation sounds very pro lovely work bass and plucky synth sound fantastic. perc is still sounding really good... great eq'ing, very crisp open hat breakdown now... gated choirish synth is great over the filtering pad. as to melody in the breakdown... harpy synth sounds awesome but i'[m not a fan of those crescendo rolls in there... makes me think of cj stone... build is awesome when it all kicks in it works really well very nice work This is indeed a Massive tune

ah thank you Lew

EDIT:nm you meant the guitar rolls

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Last edited by Massive84 on Sep-09-2004 at 15:59