No less than what I've come to expect from you The melody doesn't seem to grab my attention as much as most of your work... but that doesn't keep this from being a thoroughly enjoyable track. I'd love to offer some constructive criticism, but I haven't a clue how you could improve your work (if I did, I'd be doing it with my own stuff :P) So be satisfied that I have yet to hear a track from you that I really don't like.

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aahhhh what a beauty !! just awesome... again a masterpiece of yours ron keeeeeeep this shit up!

with each new tune you just keep getting better and better mate
lovin the bass, the perc, the pads, the fx, the works!
i can hear a ying - solid globe sound in hear... one of me all time faves... but still very original.

gees man...send this puppy around now before you make an even better one and forget about this one

TUNE!

thanx guys
now i have to make a better song than this :S will be hard hehe

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AHH the full version:

First thing, not dj friendly: the main bassline comes in at only 30 seconds, then there is not much of like a 1-2 sec break at around 55 seconds or so(32 bars i believe). Would rather hear the main bassline come in at that point or at least build it up till it gets to about 52-55secs, with a quick break there of 1-2 secs, ad than have the main full bass line right after that.That is key for a nice bass line transition in a mix between 2 tracks. Need to work that.

Now based on my comment i made in the other thread of Mike's remix, based on the sample i had at the time: This final mix does keep the energy very well throughout the track. Really liking the general atmospheres and drive of it. Very uplifting.
Overall, really nice and uplifting the way i like it, but please rework the begining structure to make it dj friendly.
Keep it up man

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Last edited by davidemonin on Sep-10-2004 at 04:31

oke, i listened to this only a 2 times now. but if i dont reply now i forget to.

melody is awesome! the synths are similar to what you have used before, but they are still nice i enjoyed listening to this! keep it up.

john

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Ok, I feel like giving someone a HUGE feedback, and guess what: I decided to listen to Sunquest... I've never noticed you before recently... Everybody is giving you great feedback. So I guess you're a shooting star among us

*Listening*
- The start is kinda weird, mainly because of those percs in the background. Sound like some clicking of some sort. But I guess they help making the tune independent, and not similar to everything else.
- Oh, those claps after 14seconds is good! Very energic.
- The bassline is good. And the lead is ok. The pads are good as well! There's some nice FX's and phasing going on as the lead plays. Good.
- Oh, the break is very good. I mean, the transition. No hesitation, just two kicks BANG BANG, and then silence. Mmmm... Nice melody fading in here.
- Hey, where did it go, the melody. (03.30) Oh, here it is (03.40) Very relaxing melody.
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Rating:
SOUNDQUALITY - 8/10
(Good, but it can get better. Listen to Carl B - All Day. That's a 10 out of 10!!!)
STRUCTURE - 6/10
(I liked it. Very unpredictable! But needs you need to add something more than just that lead and the main part. Some sort of bridge with piano, guitars, ahhh-pads, or something... And from 05.34 to 08.26, there's really nothing happening. I know it has to be DJ-friendly in the end, but this was kinda boring to listen to in the end.)
MELODY - 7/10
(Nice and relaxing. But it has to be more emotional)
CREATIVITY - 5/10
(Cool snare-rolls, Energic clap-rolls, strange clicking-sounds in the background. Hehe. Nothing more...)

My all-over-rating is then: 7/10. That's good. Remember, I compare you to professional tunes.

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Originally posted by alexpea Ok, I feel like giving someone a HUGE feedback, and guess what: I decided to listen to Sunquest... I've never noticed you before recently... Everybody is giving you great feedback. So I guess you're a shooting star among us *Listening* - The start is kinda weird, mainly because of those percs in the background. Sound like some clicking of some sort. But I guess they help making the tune independent, and not similar to everything else. - Oh, those claps after 14seconds is good! Very energic. - The bassline is good. And the lead is ok. The pads are good as well! There's some nice FX's and phasing going on as the lead plays. Good. - Oh, the break is very good. I mean, the transition. No hesitation, just two kicks BANG BANG, and then silence. Mmmm... Nice melody fading in here. - Hey, where did it go, the melody. (03.30) Oh, here it is (03.40) Very relaxing melody. - Rating: SOUNDQUALITY - 8/10 (Good, but it can get better. Listen to Carl B - All Day. That's a 10 out of 10!!!) STRUCTURE - 6/10 (I liked it. Very unpredictable! But needs you need to add something more than just that lead and the main part. Some sort of bridge with piano, guitars, ahhh-pads, or something... And from 05.34 to 08.26, there's really nothing happening. I know it has to be DJ-friendly in the end, but this was kinda boring to listen to in the end.) MELODY - 7/10 (Nice and relaxing. But it has to be more emotional) CREATIVITY - 5/10 (Cool snare-rolls, Energic clap-rolls, strange clicking-sounds in the background. Hehe. Nothing more...) My all-over-rating is then: 7/10. That's good. Remember, I compare you to professional tunes.

w00t thanx hehe
and thanx to everyone else, dont forget the Mike Foyle remix

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