whoa. this forum is quite intimidating when you hear tunes like this next to your own. nice and loud from the word go which is always a good sign. the break beat is good but you need to layer another snare with more treble and/or add a bit of air on it with an EQ because it gets lost when the synths come in and its barely audible amid the kicks and synths. the vocals could do with a long reverb on it a touch of delay and maybe widen it in the stereo field cuz it sounds fairly flat at the mo. the rest of the track is *tight* as you like though. the plucked arp is great.
if you are gonna get another session with that vocalist that would be awesome cuz i think she hits a tiny bit of a bum note dont tell her i said that though.
quality tune though. would look good with my name in front of it j/k
Oct-29-2004 02:37
Shemeck
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Jun 2003
Location: Miami
i like it
Oct-29-2004 02:59
EternalMusic
Antonio Gomez
Registered: Jul 2002
Location: Tiberias, Israel
Shalom my friend ,
Almost missed this one .
Anyway - Intro is pretty funky, i like it. Nice break. The breakbeat is sick really diggin it. The melody is abit annoying to be honest , but it might grow up on me later i guess.
Nice work guys.
Keep it real
Antonio
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Oct-29-2004 15:53
bobba lou
you need some activator
Registered: Feb 2003
Location: Mp3s killed the black beauty
good tune..breaks are really good..keep up the hard work man
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Oct-30-2004 17:03
matty
08/09 National Beach Cham
Registered: Jun 2003
Location: back in T.O
quote:
Originally posted by Derivative
if you are gonna get another session with that vocalist that would be awesome cuz i think she hits a tiny bit of a bum note dont tell her i said that though.
I think he would love to get a first session with the vocalist.
Again, nice 1 man. Do Toronto proud!!!
Oct-30-2004 20:30
UAnt
tranceaddict
Registered: Nov 2003
Location: UK
Really impressive stuff, especially the breaks.
quote:
Originally posted by Derivative
...the vocals could do with a long reverb on it a touch of delay and maybe widen it in the stereo field cuz it sounds fairly flat at the mo.
Agree with that too, the vocals seem a little "dry" to me.
Otherwise, great work!
Ant.
Oct-31-2004 00:15
Ken_Allen
Administrator
Registered: Jul 2004
Location: Albany NY
Ch0000000n!!!!
Love it
Breakbeat is hot & so are all of the leads and everything, drums could be a little more quality though
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Oct-31-2004 02:08
Sunquest
Just Be
Registered: Jan 2004
Location: Thornhill,Toronto, Canada
thanx guys
we're workin on it, with the vocals were using other samples now, because it didnt work out with the first one.... but its ok, thanx for support
!!!
dont tell her i said that though.
, but it might grow up on me later i guess.
