hi kewlness, im definetly 1 for originality.
i like the approach you take with this one. the breakdown is great melody wise, but as in the intro there's just too many things going on at once. its just hard to really latch onto any dominant instruments. i like when it kicks in with that shooting star sounding synth nice and original lacks a little energy thou.
i think you should keep the bassline sounding busy but just drop some elements and replace by layering the ones that remain.
very middle eastern.
another thing is that if you flick through the song really fast you would not know where song begins and ends it sounds like 3 songs rolled into one, which if where played in a club would leave the clubbers a bit confused and lost if that makes any sense.
but all in all good to see people trying different things, i'm the same dont like sticking to one structure. mastering sounds like and clean and loud too
keep it up!
Oct-27-2004 18:21
J.L.
Never gonna give you up.
Registered: Aug 2002
Location: Toronto, Canada
quote:
Originally posted by hadi ******
hey, did you give this to a group?
Headrush-Sphinx-PROMO-CDR-2004-REP
that ain't cool
thanks for the feedback dannyc
Oct-28-2004 06:36
EternalMusic
Antonio Gomez
Registered: Jul 2002
Location: Tiberias, Israel
Man, this is really some good stuff. Very original. Alot better than nowdays tunes.
Antonio,
Keep the good job pumping.
P.S - Thanks for sharing.
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Oct-29-2004 16:03
J.L.
Never gonna give you up.
Registered: Aug 2002
Location: Toronto, Canada
thank you antonio... glad to see people enjoy the hard work and effort i put into this... makes it all worthwhile
Oct-31-2004 05:02
Timothy
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Jun 2004
Location: Holland
The compressor on the mix needs to be worked on a bit more. It's a bit "pumping". That FX at the start ( or some 303 ) isn't really working for me.
The track is really nice. ( really nice strings/pads at the break btw )
Oct-31-2004 07:28
J.L.
Never gonna give you up.
Registered: Aug 2002
Location: Toronto, Canada
thank you timothy for listening to it...
I did make the compressor a bit "pumping" just for that purpose to give it a bit more energy to it...
Thanks everyone for listening and dropping a comment... i appreciate it =)