Hey ORange again!

To me youve definietly improved it but the bass still sounds a wee bit off to me in one part....sorry . Definitly addictive tune though.

If you click the link below my signature you can hear my latest track Orange - Ocean Depths.

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Originally posted by moolow Like the melodies a lot. Maybe u could add a new bassline in it. Otherwise. Great track!

ur track is geat also. U have to pass the tip on how to make that main forcefull electro sound.


How would u fix the bassline, is it still out of key?

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Originally posted by RickyM Hey ORange again! To me youve definietly improved it but the bass still sounds a wee bit off to me in one part....sorry . Definitly addictive tune though. If you click the link below my signature you can hear my latest track Orange - Ocean Depths.

I think I know what you mean, Is it the very last part of every bar or more?

About ur tune?
I love the ambient part at the begining, I have always found that so difficult to make. I also love the way ur synthbounces with the beat. and ur double clap is spot on. Maybe u should add another melody a on the top a tiny bit lower pitched. Ur baseline is on key
Ur tune is very very cool!!

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I like this tune OP. Very clean synths an decent percussion. Perhaps its a wee bit repetitive though, I think you should try to variate a few more melodies an try to improve the atmosphere with greater reeverb. Apart from that, pretty good quality.

--joey

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I think ive fixed it. If I havent then i have a really shit ear!

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Originally posted by JoeyEnv I like this tune OP. Very clean synths an decent percussion. Perhaps its a wee bit repetitive though, I think you should try to variate a few more melodies an try to improve the atmosphere with greater reeverb. Apart from that, pretty good quality. --joey

Cheers man!
I agree with you fully, I shall put a bit more depth to the melody but I need to get the keys right. You mean reverb on the main melody or overall?

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Result - it's on key!!!!!

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Overall. I think it needs to be more atmospheric but, of course, it's only my opinion.

--joey

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Originally posted by RickyM Result - it's on key!!!!!

Finally!!! Thanks for the help Ricky!

How can I make it more atmospheric?

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