|
Stan
I think you over did it on trying to correct the highs or brightness like what others were saying, and it seems to sound more dry now, especially with that bassline at 30 sec to like 41 secs. Did you reduce the reverb as well, maybe that is why it seems more dry to me.
Now for the original sample you posted yesterday, yes i agree that you should reduce the Highs but just a tad, and yea it might sound like it has a few lows at times, but that is just the levels/mastering, which can be done later once the tune is fully finished.
I think now you need to give it a little more highs again, and more reverb, if i am correct by saying it was reduced.
I do have to say this second version here sounds fuller though, which is a good thing, you must of worked the levels already as well.
And also, remember about the structure we talked about for dj friendliness these past 2 days
___________________
http://davidemoninmixes.ipbfree.com
http://www.myspace.com/dreamscapesmixes
|