Thanks guys , means alot to me!
David: let me know if you play them , when and where .
Thanks xeno and subtle for the constructive comments!
Antonio.
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Dec-24-2004 19:59
Perry
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Nov 2003
Location: Ashkelon
Star Gaze is my favourite but those tiny pads on the background were pissing me off :> i think u made them too thin , great bassline :P keep up the good work and yeah i dont like this belly synth on start
;] cheers
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Dec-24-2004 20:13
State of Matter
Mashed Potatoes
Registered: Aug 2003
Location: Maryland, USA
Hey, don't know why I never got around to reviewing these.
They are both really great, you've improved a lot since the first couple of tracks i heard from you on these boards.
My only beef with these songs is that they sound filterry. Its as if the bass is being cut, and the midrange and treble is being boosted, so the songs sound hollow. I'd make the bass more prominent and get a more full sound going. Also there's a slight overuse of reverb.
Melodically and structurally they are amazing. Good work again.
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star gate:
nice beginning, i like fx in bacground but to be honest dont like this hmm synth sound its a bit too loud and discint :P, great bassline, percusion is great too, wow i love melodies comes later in track, but this first synth doesnt fit for me (delete it if you can :P) except that its really great !!
Illusion:
great bassline for me its better from star gate, really like melodies in this one
overall both tracks are very good, keep them coming
SOM: I donnt know how to improve the sound hehe. I extract it in low volume in FL and then run it in Soundforge and Tracks. What do u think?
Cheers everyone
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Dec-31-2004 13:31
EternalMusic
Antonio Gomez
Registered: Jul 2002
Location: Tiberias, Israel
Anyone else? please
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Jan-07-2005 00:42
Mycron
Aneym.com Staff
Registered: Nov 2002
Location: Budapest
both are quality, prefer Illusion, though, but best tracks from you easily so far,
mastering seems great,
keep up the good work, man,
and please, continue to amaze me
Peter
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Jan-07-2005 00:49
Massive84
Old Relic
Registered: Jul 2003
Location: Sequence Realm
Illusion is really great, bass is so mint. Just dislike the hihat a bit that is panned.
Some nice choirs/pads are floating around.
1.27 that voice needs to be more subtle.
1.38 ah now the intro starts building, nice melody.
break:
Such a nice sequence here.
Oke climax, when everything kicks in , the kick seems suddenly lighter, which makes it a weak climax,
Main lead could be a little more agressive.
Further good job here mate
Star gate.
Not really my thing, to many high pitched synths hehe.
Jan-13-2005 12:18
mef
www.acutemusic.co.uk
Registered: Jul 2003
Location: New Cross, London...
Illusion...
Love that bass. Classic. Progresses nicely. Maybe needs bigger percs? Maybe louder? Overall good. That lead synth with the slide effect may need to be put back a bit (maybe adding more reverb?) Just a thought.
Star Gate...
Percs are good. Volume up a bit? Nice progression. Maybe look at the synth sounds in the bulidup? Nice fx in the break. Good stuff
, means alot to me!
