the kick sounds very muffled, the clap doesnt sit in the mix + the hissy open hat sounds rather strange. bass is fairly weak. the synths are pretty good and there are some nice fx in there. melody is ok.

dont get me wrong, you're good... but i dont think you're quite there yet + perhaps posting full tracks would get you some more in depth feedback + critically evaluate the production + sequencing as a whole

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hi pete
i like what you have done... synths are very nice, but the perc and the bass are a bit weak and delete the conga's or add some more delay/reverb...the pads are ok.

-renco

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Hey Pete
This tune has nice melodies, but as already mentioned, i think you need to work that kick, and not liking that clap too much though.

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I'm not really into this track, and I find it hard to say why... Maybe because it's just a preview. I think it needs some more pronounced melodies, I find this style way too overdone sometimes.

I just liked your other ones better I guess

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very atmospheric/chill/proggy kidna trance.

Very well produced however there are some things i will mention that throw it off a bit

1) bass and kick: the bass is not prominent enough and is too muddy. The kick could be a bit sharper and tighter..

2)bongos: a bit too loud... and try giving it a bit more variation to it which will make it sound more intersting

3)claps and hi hats: i don't know why.. don't really like the clap.. it's very standard sounding and doesn't seem to fit with the rest of the track. I don't like the sizzling kinda sound with the hats or whatever it is...

Otherwise, this is a very nice track. Great attention to detail. very well done i must say.. Keep working on it

Eek, another sample. Oh well! I like the melodic elements of this track, although nothing in particular really stands out. Unfortunately I have to agree with others regarding the percussion - the clap doesn't quite work and the hissy open hi-hat is too weak. Attend to these issues and you'll have made quite an improvement.

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i like the synthwork and melodies... but am not a fan of the percussion, however

i think there is too much white noise throughout this track... i think it's one of your synths, can't really tell tho, it'd sound better if you EQed it out

overall, a nice relaxed tune, definately different from all that mainstream stuff

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Hello !
i'be just heard endforest - island of angels (Retroid remix) in gdjb, and i wanna have some info about vynil release or other
i really love this track !

can you re-upload the sample of endforest-believe, i want to hear it

thx !

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Originally posted by NeoWave Hello ! i'be just heard endforest - island of angels (Retroid remix) in gdjb, and i wanna have some info about vynil release or other i really love this track ! can you re-upload the sample of endforest-believe, i want to hear it thx !

thanks mate, im glad you like it!

well not sure anything about the release yet, but i will keep you updated,

i will also upload a sample of Believe as soon as it possible,

cheers,

Peter

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the retroid remix is awesome

now i wanna hear the original

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