ok i uploaded new version, chceck 1st post for link :P

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nice track, moving



are there two bassline synths, ones that does lowend and one that does midrange (the grundgy one)

the midrange bass sounds great, i think it should be more stereoseparated and lowered in volume... but for the bassline i don't hear any subbass at all


breakdown is fine, there's no crash or anything that transitions from teh buildup into the mainsection... the snares rise in volume and then the main section comes in without a crash, that could use fixing, imo


just a couple revisions and this song will get the crowd stompin'

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NumberNin6 / Ethereal / Orana Project / Greenlight

hey man, ok first off, i think too much reverb on ur bass, and synth
u need to make ur bass real clear and sharp, pumped in the face
and the trance synth needs to also be sharper, its because u got too much reverb...
the piano is nice, melody u know how to do hehe, so thats good,
so its pretty much less reverb and making each sound sound really clear, work on each sound, 1 by 1,

ttyl

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wow!
excellent work!
cool bass
awesome melodies

thx a lot for feedbacks, i uploaded another version with those improvmnet you guys mentioned above

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Awesome track rite here man, the synths are really sweet, the bass is good.. perfect stuff.. makes me wanna work on my remix too.. good job and keep it up..

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the synths are very nice, but the bass still sounds really muddy. i also think there were waaay too many crashes during the build, but then there wasnt one when it kicked in, which was odd.

pretty nice work tho.

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1st post updated for those who would like to get it enjoy

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good update man,

your remix is very nice

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Not bad at all, breakdown's really good although it lacks a crash or some other hit sound when it comes back in (would probably sound fine without the crashes before it). I can hardly hear the bassline though, definately bring that out more. Synths are really good, you just need to tidy things up a bit and you're there.

5/10

(Scale: 0 = don't bother, 1-3 = needs work, 4-5 = nearly there, 6-8 = releasable, 9-10 = I'd play it)

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Nice track mate.

I think the kick is just too powerful for the mood of the track, and the bassline needs to be more audible, for the rest, it's all good buddy!!

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